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Enchantment of The Heart
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Enchantment of The Heart |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Enchantment Of The Heart… Sailing into the shadows of loneliness they feel as though they have been cast to the barren seas of solitude clinging to a distant love which sometimes seems as tangible as the mythical mermaid they believe this is what allows them to breathe lonely hearts clouded with a mist ever present in the company of tears, tears of longing, both his and hers the burden of pain conceived in longing is one almost too much to bear but with each passing day, the enchantment of the heart directs the current closer to shore and in the instant eyes meet eyes the healing of lonely days is complete Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"the healing of lonely days is complete" It's really true isn't it? Loneliness can be healed and it's a beautiful thing, I enjoyed this and the imagery free and fresh. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions....this is a wonderful wistful philosphical type of poem very nice indeed!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a wonderful piece from you. I am so glad that you decided to join us here in Passions. You have said so much truth in this as lonliness does seem to dissipate with the possession of new found meaning, especially when it is in the eyes of one that truely cares for us. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes a nice description of healing and a renewal of desires...James |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
thank you everyone, this was actually writtten for online lovers. thre are two people from another board who are distanced by states andthey and their love for each other inspired this piece. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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