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You Made Me Live Again
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You Made Me Live Again |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
You opened up my heart Took away that mental block Even though for you and me I know that it may never be You made me live again Before you came into my life Mere existence was my lot Hanging on the fringe of things Afraid to expose myself to pain But now I am alive again My heart is frozen no longer My soul rejoices in the fact Now I'm a participant in life Never will I regret that you Broke through fear to make me feel Even if we never are You'll live forever in my heart You've set me free < !signature--> Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass [This message has been edited by peppermint35 (edited 11-08-2000).] |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
very nice peppermint sometimes we need a little push to get out of the funk of misery. Glad to see the proper steps are being taken. Rich |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
P35~ I really liked the warm feel of this, the growth and the understanding are beautiful.  -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"You've set me free" I used to think these words would not relate to me, but I truly know how you feel. I loved reading this and hoping it was all so real for you and isn't it a wonderful feeling? "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You have penned yet another beauty in your new found happiness. Loved it much. Tis nice to have that fresh breath of life isn't it? |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you, SEA Yes, Kathleen it is a wonderful feeling!!! Ah Mark, I feel like I can breathe freely for the first time in years!!! Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Pepper, this is another one of your wonderful poems. It's wonderful, nothing like being set free, a lovely brilliant piece. I love this one. Truly I do. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PepperMint~ 'Now I'm a participant in life' Welcome to life, sweet friend ... it's a glorious place to soar. Thanks for sharing your thoughts - Fly free ! Fly free ! Fly free ! The above statement is not an advertisement for an airlines free miles program. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Pepper, loved this. if you were an egg you'd be broken, instead you emerge as a creature with wings. Kethry. Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
Pepper What A wonderful reminder of how it feels to be free. Whether in the heart or in life its self. Though you were speaking of being free of the walls that you built, It took my mind back to slavery and the salvation of being ones own free person. Thank you for shareing. PLY |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
peppermint-- beautiful!! this poem is full of such hope and love. loved it! sometimes it takes a special someone to show us that we do indeed have much to live for and to open up our hearts once again. take care. ~amy~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And that is a very valuable blessing given from ones heart...James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Pepper* I'm beaming while reading your new poetry...the light that has been glowing in your heart is shining beautifully in your work...I'm so happy for you! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wonderful to read a poem of new found hope. ~alive again, a heart no longer frozen~ Nicely written. Deb |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
almost let this fade away, without seeing it.....Im glad that I found it...I'm glad that you live again...and will be happy again in your new love.. wonderful penned (((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'You opened up my heart Took away that mental block Even though for you and me I know that it may never be You made me live again' Beautiful, pepper! I really loved this one!! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautifully said pepper, I wish more of us whom suffer from past love's lost would wake up and see what you now see. One needs to separate the idea that "that's all there could ever be, my life's over, there'll never be another...I'll Never Love Again." We're too resilient for that. Love and heartache is like any other lesson in life; it serves to grow us, strengthen us, and the sooner we learn to make memories of past heartache, the richer (as with you) our lives will become. jwesley |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Let me just say thank you all for your wonderful comments I do feel especially blessed, just to be able to share my thoughts and feelings with such a wonderful group as all of you Big, big hugs Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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