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Surrender
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Surrender |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Surrender Surrender me your breath for life For with it you shall feel it twice Submit to that I wish to teach Give in and then, new heights you’ll reach Yield not to passions yet untold I’ll share with you these keys I hold Give up this gentle masquerade Your fantasies will guide my way Capitulate all foreign thought And focus on this dream we’ve sought Hold out your hand and let me in And let this storyline begin So surrender to me all control And open up with all you know To stay with me this foregone night We’ll dance until the morning light Then start a brand new day. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I surrender....willingly |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
So surrender to me all control Oh Baby, I hand it to you on a silver platter!!! oops, not very lady like was it?(giggle) excellent writing. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Well, this is quite something. Bold and romantic at the same time. Whew! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yes, this IS quite something, as are you... a lovely read, Rich...quite touching. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Paula, Whispers, Irish and serenity I thank you very much as Your responses have been very flattering. Thanks Rich |
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