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My Dreams This Day Amplified
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My Dreams This Day Amplified |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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My Dreams This Day Amplified Tossing rose petals in the wind Watch then toil not, just spin Where they go, who shall know Lightly dancing to and fro My dreams I send same way Tossing them in winding waves Hoping on winged flight to find They come back to me amplified Understanding my dreams this day I dance, sing and play time away No fear I have for I do know What I want, which way to go Tossing rose petals to the wind Taught me how not to toil, but spin Giving my dreams a chance at flight Now I dance both day and night So toss your dreams to the wind Watch them toil not, but spin Fulfill your hearts desires Don’t wait till they expire By, Cerenity This is an attempt at rhyming, so I hope its OK. "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
you did a wonderful job of rhyming..i have trouble with the free verse..haa..enjoyed  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Victoria, Thank you so much for your kind reply. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love the picture of rose petals flying in the wind. And if you can make your dreams come true, I am happy for you. Beautiful images here, and the rhyming was fine. Sandra |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Sandra, Thank you so much for your kind reply, dreaming I can make my dreams come true, or at least I now what I want I guess. Love, Cerenity |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Miss Cerenity~ The imagery you painted in my mind was so very beautiful...you just keep dreaming those beautiful dreams...with a heart like yours they will land and bloom. Excellent writing~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Cerenity...this is very beautiful...the image of rose petals spinning through the air...like a drift of rainbow clouds...beautiful |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Cerenity, sending rose petals your way my friend. . . Good job with the rhyming!!! --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Miss. Butterfly, Thank you, some times when depressed, it helps to take flight and imangine your dreams coming true, and what better way than on the petals of a rose. Paula, Thank you as well, the weather has been a little breezey and I just happend to be in the garden when the idea came to mind, Sven, Hi, Please buckets and buckets, its a beautiful sight, hope the big Vac. is great! thank you. Love to all, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
perfect rhyming cerenity, beautiful poem. I never expected love to solve the world, just me. Now it's my understanding that friendship is a collapsible thing. It seemed we were the sun. Now I'm not your day. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Brian, Nice to see you, I have not seen your name of late, hope all is well with you, thank you so much for the reply, and I will be looking for you. Love. Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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