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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Horizon's Ripples. ~~Daniel J D~~ Calm at the far distance The sun breaking my glance Horizon! Horizon! Waves making you dance. Staring ahead, no hatred, no love Confusion, on that lonely shore Horizon! Horizon! Heart aching at the core. Darkness of thunderous clouds Strong and thick rain falling Horizon! Horizon! Breaking, seas battering. Life's dangers have become realities Memories, now only for storage Horizon! Horizon! If only, warning you engage. Calm again, and composed Peaceful, rays of rainbows, you showed Horizon! Horizon! Understand, now I do. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Daniel, this is very well done.. i like the use of the repetative lines and the way you brought all the emotions full circle, leaving the final thoughts of hope. lovely poem poet sir take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Daniel...this is beautiful...sad and lonely...but with that glimpse of hope |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love the theme and the repetitveness. Horizons to me, signify hope. Good Job. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was lovely Daniel ... such a positive sparkle of inspriation and hope in the closing, very much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
JM, Thank you so much. Life's horizons surrounds our every movement like waves beneath the winds. Paula, Hope is with us, we hold it and we release it. Smiles. Irish Rose, I look forward to your replies, and take heed of your every word. Thank you! Kit, Thank you kindly, the circle of life has its ups and downs. Is not it incredible how we can raise ourselves from the depths of despair. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Here is some very emotional writing. And formatted in a very appealing way. Hope things are going well. Sandra |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sandra, Thank you so very much. Life is such that horizons never settle. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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