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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2000-11-04 04:01 PM




                                 Lost In..

                             You whisper words
                             of passion softly
                           in my ear as I become
                            lost in your desire.

                                 You search
                              deeply into my
                             being as I become
                             lost in your soul.

                                You hold me
                              tightly and we
                             dance as I become
                         lost in your heart sounds.

                                You take me
                              away to another
                             place as I become
                            lost in your touch.

                                 You are my
                                every breath
                                as I become
                             lost in your love.


On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.


© Copyright 2000 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
1 posted 2000-11-04 04:04 PM


Now this is the way to be lost!!!  Lovely write by you

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale
2 posted 2000-11-04 04:07 PM


Lost in the wonder of love beyond realism.

Beautiful token of love.

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
3 posted 2000-11-04 04:17 PM


Oh to be soooo lost....this was a beautiful poem  
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2000-11-04 06:41 PM


whoa...lost, but found, hey?

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-11-04 09:37 PM


I'll be lost like this any day!!

Great poem Gentle Spirit. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
6 posted 2000-11-04 09:39 PM


Ahhhh to be lost in love...without a map to
get out    This is beautiful...so tenderly
written~

kitkat
Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
7 posted 2000-11-05 02:01 AM


Oh I too am lost and never want to be found except in his arms *sighs*

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King



Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
8 posted 2000-11-10 12:03 PM


GentleSpirit~
Well now ...
this lovely was lost on page 15 ...
and I found you !

Glad I took the time to browse.
This is just a beautifully written piece.
*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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