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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Sparkling diamonds glistening in the dark magical feelings, feelings of love ecstasies thy voice, thou doth embark salty tearsdrops, painting prisms above Lying here consuming me with passion prisms, diamonds, spinning out of control whispers of your heart stir sensations trembling, your voice flows through my soul Sparkling diamonds glistening in the night brilliant sparkles, everywhere I look clarity of love, a beautiful delight teardrops flowing, a shimmering brook Thou hast made me feel loved, beautiful and free Prisms of diamonds, tis all I ask of thee A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is gorgeous, Victoria! Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Victoria~ you are among the Queens of romance in here....  -SEA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Victoria, anyone would think you have some kind of hot romance going. You either have a wonderful new love, or a very romantic memory. This is another gem. Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sparkling diamonds glistening in the dark magical feelings, feelings of love ecstasies thy voice, thou doth embark salty tearsdrops, painting prisms above Lying here consuming me with passion prisms, diamonds, spinning out of control whispers of your heart stir sensations trembling, your voice flows through my soul ============ this jewel of a poem shines divine.. Victoria this is very lovely... as always your trademark.. vivid imagery laced with passion and romance wonderful writing take care jm |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Elizabeth..thank you very much..appreciate your kind remarks..glad you enjoyed.. SEA..haa...well i dont know about that but NICE of you to say anyway SEA..  Sandra..And what if i am ?ha..  actually i wrote this a year and and a half ago but did some editing today  thank you honJanet marie..Thank you so much..i love your romance too Janet..always from your heart.. ~Victoria~ < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Victoria! Denise |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much Denise..nice to hear from you.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
:Thou hast made me feel loved, beautiful and free" Victoria, how do you read my mind? This is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Victoria ~ What lovely images you have penned, this is sooooooo beautiful... Bonnie |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Kathleen..something about love that makes you feel beautiful all over.. Bonnie..Thank you Bonnie..go glad you like..diamonds are a girls best friend..ha.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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