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Nate Dogg
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0 posted 2000-11-07 04:21 PM


I bet that most of you won't like this but, that's fine cause I don't like it either...I'm just mixing up my combinations that I throw at y'll....I wanna be as unpredictable as I can....who knows, I might throw a heavy-mental poem after this series....we shall see!

Dear diary,                        Thursday 12, 1967

My body, has been posessed by demonic spirits
and I tried to tell my wife
but, she ain't hearing it
and I'm afraid of what might happen if the evil,
takes over complete control, of my body and soul,
like me turning into Jason and start killing people.
Man, if only I had someone to believe me
because everyone I know, thinks I'm crazy.
Well, that's their stupidity and their loss
because, soon they'll realize how much,
their own ignorance and stubborness cost
because my demeanor, is as cold as Jack Frost!

Nathan

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-11-07 04:38 PM


Nate~this was interesting. I truly believe that some people are possessed by demons and need a lot of help in order to overcome them. Thanks for sharing this.

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



compassion
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2 posted 2000-11-07 04:49 PM


I'm biting: Yes, demons' can/do possess a person; Remember, for every good gift from God,(angels,etc.) the devil has a duplicate serving his purpose for evil (demon).

As far a Jason and the like are concerned, that may/may not be related. Many mental health issues are associated with such when perhaps they are that..health issues.
My view.

Nate Dogg
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3 posted 2000-11-09 02:06 PM


Thank you Liz and compassion, for your comments.

Nathan

Paula Finn
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4 posted 2000-11-09 02:25 PM


Nathan...I believe you...I know these feeelings and how they can take control...who cares if anyone likes this? If you need to say it we are here to listen

Don't close your eyes to the possibilities


Kethry
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5 posted 2000-11-09 03:46 PM


Nate,
because my demeanor, is as cold as Jack Frost! I like this the comparison of outside calm and inside turmoil is brilliant.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

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6 posted 2000-11-09 04:45 PM


I believe you too, there is more between heaven and earth than we know.
hope that you are ok..

((warm hugs))
Charisma

ethome
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7 posted 2000-11-10 03:16 PM


Scientists have proven that there is an existence in the spirit world...so why can't some of the spirits be bad like some humans. Really it's these wicked spirits that influence the wrong in the hearts of some people.......or at least I think so anyway??
Nate Dogg
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8 posted 2000-11-13 01:31 PM


Wow, I'm shocked of all the comments I've got and I'm happy for them but, I must say that this poem is made-up but I do believe in demons though...thnak you al for responding and have a fantastic day!

Nathan

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