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A Man and Point Three of a Second
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A Man and Point Three of a Second |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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When it rains there’s certain sadness That will overcome a fella The pretty girls all hide their heads Under blossoming umbrellas From their car to the building Grabbing tightly at their skirts The fellas can’t even catch a smile And I can tell yuh that really hurts Guys don’t usually get primeval But round a tree you see them huddle Look for me I’m splashing through In every rainbow-polluted puddle I sit and think, I can’t girl watch Here is something I’d like to do For every time I see you shiver Here's my umbrella just for two [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A sweet write Walt, and one more thing I add to this... make sure the umbrella holds strong cus ya neva know which way the wind will blow... YUH YUH YUH me likez this poem got me thinking...  Coco |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i would rather you throw your coat over the puddle for me.. haa Is shivery dead or what ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Walt, What a great sense of humor you have and I really smiled through this read. Good one.  Yu bad, well, just go ahead and LOOK, then quickly turn away.. "From their car, to walk, to building Grabbing tightly at their skirts The fellas can’t catch a glance, a smile And I can tell yuh how that hurts" |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Walt, yuh suh-prize me everytime. Just put on yuh rain slicka and chase em on down.yuh Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i try not to think of me as a perve but i guess its all i really deserve |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
Very cute...you put a smile on my face, especially since it's rained here for 3 days! Never thought of it impeding the girl-watchers though, you always put a new perspective on things! Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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