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Worth the Wait
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Worth the Wait |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Worth the Wait I await that first snowfall, softness that slowly licks my cheeks leaving it's moisture behind, making them rosey to your eyes, Changing my paleness, the frail look that has overtaken me, from sick of heart, to a colourful glow, giving me some joy to look forward to. Once I walked hand in hand, leaving prints behind, for those to see I shared a love, a fantasyland of dreams come true. This time when I walk, there will only be one set of prints, no gloved hand to warm mine, and the winds shall cover my steps, leaving no trace of me. I shall walk each step, looking ahead watching for your prints, long stretches between, noticing your stride, clinging (though only slightly) to the dreams I hold of you in my mind. There will come a time, when I shall catch up to you and you will be free as the fresh fallen snow, to be swept away in my love... and then you too, shall know. ~Wynter's Wait "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wynter~ I saw it all, I felt it...so lonely...... the wanting......the needing.... this is GREAT! I loved the ending best.  -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely NT...it is snowing here today..four inches expected...nicely done.. love it~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wynter, this is lovely... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Glad to see you are feeling better, as I can read the change in this poem, a change of hope and a look towards the future, I told you it was just ahead, so keep going, one step at a time. Beautiful words to live by. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Wynter this is a very well thought out poem. Hope you finally do catch up and find that which you want. Rich |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Wynter! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Just lovely - 'There will come a time, when I shall catch up to you and you will be free as the fresh fallen snow' Laden with heartfelt thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wynter~ What beauty You have penned something very inspirational here...well done Tracie~ Worth the look  Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
SEA- the ending will be my renewed beginning...I am only waiting for that first white to coat my life to lead me forward ...{{huggzz}} and thanks ~Wynter Still "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~V~...I wish we had that snow, but I do believe we are in for a heavy dose of rain, my pounding head is telling me that much and so this may be the last reply for a few hours until it begins and the pressure releases me. Will catch you later, sent you an icq but you were n/a {{{huggzz}} til then. ~Wynter (sighs) "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Wynter...I do hope you find that which your heart seeks and that he is deserving of this love you keep for him Don't close your eyes to the possibilities |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love how the title sets up the content, which has a very yearning call to it, I really enjoyed the comparisons with the season...this is a beautiful read!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sunshine- thank you I am happy you liked my words. brightens my nightRon- I am just trying to turn that corner, I am not quite there yet but it can't be all angles can it?  Rich- thank you, I am not searching, I feel it is somewhere waiting for me...happiness that is thank you all ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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