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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Catalina is always responding to my sad poems with "this is my life" or "were you there"...so, since I write evrything sad that reflects her love/life...I have now decided to give her this poem...and now she must live by it and be happy! I think that's how it works. she said it, not me lol Washed along silent moon watched shores Are dreams of love for evermore Gently rolling into to sand shifted dunes Summer winds whistle a passion’s tune A flute of music played for the heart to swoon A song of love sung beneath sweet Catalina moon Where two will dance in beloved embrace Rhythm matched by waves with breaking pace A sweet entangle of lover's scene On sands enlightened by moonlight beam Where rise of dawn always seems to come too Kisses stolen ‘neath the lamplight of a Catalina moon there you go...live by it. < !signature--> Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Ron, words for all to hope to live by. really beautiful. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
ron you're the best man you man just the best let the rest say it better |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This is spectacular! Ooh and for such a sweet, sweet poet. Thank you for writing this for her,...really, you are truly kindhearted and poetically gifted. This is super. *Peace. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very thoughtful, Ron! You are very sweet! Loved it!! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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The Poetic Plumber Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 38 |
ron I think you have quite a natural talent for writing. I look forward to many more. roger |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RonK~ You are the sweetest....this is wonderful.....maybe you will change her luck with this magical poem.  -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
hope it works! Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I hope no one minds the bump...so catalinamoon may find this. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh this is lovely, Ron. Now if your words can make it happen, I am on my way to the beach, (first I have to take a plane to San Diego LOL) This is so nice of you, to write something to make me happy. I actually do have a little smile going, a rare thing of late. Catalinamoon..(Sandra) |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
hey, that's a start. And you do have to start somewhere. This is the beginning of all your happy days. You have to believe that. A fresh new start with an open heart and your on your way. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I just had the PIP jeweler cast another crown - now there are three - you , mark and 'deer- a triumverate of romantic poets -and a finer bunch of musketeers Dumas never created. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
What a beautiful, heartfelt gift! Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Ron! Lovely! Denise |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Ron, A lovely tribute to a most deserving poet. Some really great poems penned from her. Nice job & this is so thoughtful of you too. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
what a beautiful way to make someone smile....*S* Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
so kind of you Ron..im sure you did make her smile with this lovely poem.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Ron, there is nearly as much beauty in this poem as there is in your heart. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Ron, This is simply beautiful and I can't think of a better person to write it for, and guess what I live very near San Diego, so she can come stay with me and live happily ever after. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You made her smile and thus you made me smile, too. A perfect jesture at the right time. Lovely poem for someone lovely Liz |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You've made her smile, that's a great first step. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful words Ron, as always from your heart to your pen ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh so lovely kind sir....Simply beautiful. Bonnie |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ron... Oh....she loves this, I am positive!! A really nice poem to give to a really nice girl!!  Follow your dream! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Ron~ This is fantastic! Sounds like a beautiful love song. Deb |
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