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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
Only the fiercest eyes of love would kneel in prayer for finding thee Only the softest fleeting dove could hold the praise I would give so free For weakness in body and spirit came when I first saw your face Twas an image of true worth and spirit and I gasped, dreaming of your embrace To all the fates in all the lands I bow in honor, hopefully to gaze upon the sweetest hands for surely heaven has smiled on me Your smile, and the touch of caress drew my eyes to you seemingly so I knelt down and prayed in earnest that my heart, one day you would know. [This message has been edited by Highlander (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For weakness in body and spirit came when I first saw your face Twas an image of true worth and spirit and I gasped, dreaming of your embrace ================== Your smile, and the touch of caress drew my eyes to you seemingly so I knelt down and prayed in earnest that my heart, one day you would know. ============== this is enchanting and exquisite ... Welcome to Passions Highlander(cool name) you have made a lovely poetic entrance with this beauty I look forward to more of your work take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Highlander~ Hi  and WELCOME to PASSIONSThere is so much beauty in this your opening piece and how very well penned it is...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Highlander~ WELCOME! I like the name too, very cool This is a beautiful entrance you have made......enjoyed this...... -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Welcome Highlander~ Glad to have you join our circle of friendship. This is a lovely piece you've done. I know you'll LOVE it here ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Highlander! What a breath-takingly beautiful first post, lovely sentiments ... I hope to read more! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Highlander, hello and please let me welcome you to Passions. I haven't "been" here very long either, but I am certain that you will find a great deal of support and encouragement for your writing, which, by the way, is lovely. Your poem is striking, and I thank you for sharing it. Rainydays |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Gil, What a beautiful way to introduce yourself to this forum. Stunning as always. Annie Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
HIGHLANDER, this is beautiful indeed and a grande entrance you have made on a first post I look forward to many more readings... Coco |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our family! Please check your email for a special message. This is an incredible piece of writing! I look forward to reading a lot more from you!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful heartfelt emotions flowing in this poem..very nice work!! Welcome to Passions I look forward to reading more from your pen.. take care ethome |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Now THIS is romantic poetry with style! Very well done, sir. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Highlander--What a beautiful poem...I was looking for you to thank you for replying to my poem...Welcome to Passions! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Your smile, and the touch of caress drew my eyes to you seemingly so I knelt down and prayed in earnest that my heart, one day you would know.' What beautiful lines, Highlander! Absolutely love this one! Welcome to Passions!! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed... Welcome to our Passionate home..  |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions Very good entrance post! I hope you enjoy this community a lot "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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The Poetic Plumber Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 38 |
I think you certainly have a fine way with words. This is only my second day on this site. I think it is wonderful here. I look forward to more of your words. Roger< !signature--> [This message has been edited by The Poetic Plumber (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Welcome to Passions...an excellent entrance with your first post. I'm looking forward to reading much more of your work. Your writing is beautiful~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you write beautifully - in this case - you hapen to write for me as well - thank you (and welcome ) |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Welcome, Highlander! You'll love it here...this is obviously a sincere and heartfelt verse. Thank you for sharing! ~ Beth |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wow highlander kick tail feathers with this yuh yuh great job! |
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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
Janet Marie: You are quite welcome. Thank you for a most generous reply. Balladeer: Thank you Sir. Tracie: It's a pleasure to come across a forum with such an abundance of fine poets and beautiful ladies! Sea: Thank you I believe I shall stay! Marge: Your embossed words thrill me, thank you. Kit: I was inspired from reading the words of an angel. Thank you. Rainy Days: Ah, no rain for any poet here, thank you! Annie: I appreciate those words. Coco: Thank you so much for welcoming this wandering poet. Poet: I see you are new also. Thank you. Ethome: I've searched many poetry sites, but I knew this was fate when I found my inspiration. Michael: Thank you so much Martie: And you, fair lady, thank you. Snowpants: You are very kind. Nan: How sweet to be welcomed by so many. Lakewalker: Poetry is only as good as it's muse.Thank you Poet Plumber: Thank you Butterflies: Your welcome is well received. Wilford: Then there must be a special lady in your life as well, I have yet only admired all the poetry here and thank you Elizabeth: A fine name and a kind reply. Wayoutwait: I thank you [This message has been edited by Highlander (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
..the screen view went away and I sit here full of thoughts & feelings, yet breathless, yet wordless..yet Wonderfully written. + |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow, am I glad this one flew back to the top...just so I could add, "me too!...I like this...me too!" Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
This is a great poem, and I look forward to reading more from you! Best wishes Jon |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions...love this romantic entrance,....superb Charisma |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Highlander, what a beautiful way to make an entrance, in a very "olde world" way. I'm sure you will love it here. WELCOME! Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Highlander- WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! i know you'll enjoy being a part of this wonderful circle of friends. i much enjoyed this beautiful first post of yours, and look forward to reading lots more. -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Quite satisfying to read...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions. This is a wonderful introductry poem you've written. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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