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Passions Gallery--Temptress (wisteria dreams)
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Passions Gallery--Temptress (wisteria dreams) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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she's not who you think she is although she could be she could make you stop and think that she is but you'll never really know all you can do is just talk to her to know her heart to see the person behind the words she exists in time and in space she is everywhere and she is nowhere you don't just know her, you feel her she fills the air like the quiet of her aura making you see yourself she weaves a spell, but not really. . . they're just words, just syllables of night are you sleeping or awake? you realize that you are too late and that you've been having wisteria dreams ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Although I really don't know these people, I feel that I'm being introduced to them through your writing. I like it. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
A gentleman's verse for a special lady? Very well done. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven, special write for someone so special to passions...well done, fine tribute to our temptress lady  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, excellent write. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
excellent lady and excellent tribute |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Temptress, you've been Svened! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
*wisteria dreams* so beautiful sven.. and everyone should have a temptress or be one haa  temptress will love it ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Passions Voice, it's my pleasure to introduce them all to you. . . thank you. . . Highlander, nothing so formal, just a verse for a friend, from a friend. . . thanks for reading. . . Tracie, thank you my friend Kethry, thank you. . . walt, thank you and thank you!! Sunshine, LOL I would not say that she's been Svened but rather Penned by Sven! thank you my friend. . . Victoria, yes we all should be. . . and to learn from the best. . . thank you. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice words you have written about Temptress..I kindof like the words Sunshine said...she has been Svened however penned by Sven is good also..James |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Being penned by Passions' Sven! How divine a curse But which is best, Being penned or Svenned? And which, pray tell, is verse? Teasing Sven, and enjoying these lovely poems of yours! Rainydays |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh yeah, she's gonna love this. Lovely as always my friend. Juls |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James, thank you my friend. . . either way you look at it. . . Rainydays. . . LOL at your reply. . . I love it!  thank you my friend. . .Juls, thank you, I hope that she likes it too. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
OH WOW!! I've been Svenned have I? *blushes* I just don't know what to say except that it is an honor. Sven, Thank you so much. I adore what you have done here. Ohh...and you're welcome to the wisteria anytime! Now if only we can find a way to bottle and market it! Time will tell, eh? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Yes, this is the elusive but not elusive temptress, very well described, my friend. Your words capture the mystique of this poetess and yet you can't quite capture her. She's the kind of person you would love to meet personally and to know her. Your gallery is wonderful Liz |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
*grins* and I'm lucky enough to know where she lives. I am going to faint from the weight of it all. hehehee Love to my dreamer. |
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