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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2000-11-06 06:01 PM


Three small words

Three small words like
"I want you"
can capture a heart forever.

Three small words like
"I need you"
can form an unbreakable bond.

Three small words like
"I love you"
can move the universe.

Three important words -
want, need, love.

Two very important words -
"You" and "I."

One most important word -
Us
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Love is.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-06-2000).]

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-11-06 06:30 PM


The 3 words will keep the 2 words......1....love this one   -SEA
insect
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2 posted 2000-11-06 07:08 PM


I like this.
Nicely done!


*WELCOME TO PASSIONS*

Ron K. Fox
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3 posted 2000-11-06 07:10 PM


Bravo! nice entry. we will be waiting for more...so welcome aboard.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


Interloper
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4 posted 2000-11-07 09:10 AM


SEA - Thank you for your 1derful welcome.  I appreciate your comments, and value them.

Insect - After reading your offerings and comments I can only say ... I know I will have arrived when you reply to me in verse.

Ron - Your approbation is valued ... what does that mean?

Love is.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-06 02:32 PM


Found this, your very first posting at PIP!
I have "Three small words for you"---I love it! ---and I love your writing----It's amazing all the thousands of words you've written over the past two years! Keep 'em coming!

A fan!

Linda

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displaced
6 posted 2003-01-27 09:28 AM


wow! this is great!
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2003-11-25 01:35 AM


DearPoet~
Though you are no longer here, I hope that someday you will return.
Thank goodness for these archives so that I may peruse the poetry of good friends and leave a reply for you to find should you venture home~

I miss you, Loper~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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