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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas 
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In the dark I see your face... it rivals the night. The memories are daggers borring into me and I cannot stop it. You always find me No matter where I go. Your eyes haunt me caress me shame me and I cannot look away. I can feel you on my skin, full of heat. Lingering gazes burn me with only a memory. Look away from me! I want to see the moon again. I want to sleep without you in my dreams. In the dark I see your face... it rivals the night. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hmmm, I detect a strong "Look away from me..." but only for a moment then turn round again and hide the night. Well written, saxoness, lovely piece jwesley |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is so very true. You write of such pain. Take care. Sandra |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
This was the only good thing that came from a very bad situation. Thanks ya'll. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Saxoness~ this is two in one night! Wow!  Loved this"I want to sleep without you in my dreams." I know what that feels like.......beautifully written.  -SEA |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Thanks, SEA. My sleep is hard in coming as it is.... "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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