Open Poetry #10 |
Fighting with Faith |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Fighting with Faith < !signature-->Amy M. Kennedy I wonder does my pillow know my heart It should with all my tears It was there when this love first got its start And is the keeper of all my fears Darling I am fighting hard as I can As hard as I know how Don't you see my outstreched hand Still, can't help how I'm feeling now They just don't understand this love we share I don't think they ever will They don't understand how much we truly care Or believe our feelings are real My heart cries out in pain I feel I've hurt you so I want to hold you in the pouring rain And never let you go I promised I wouldn't stop trying And my promises...I do keep But I can't seem to stop crying My love for you runs so deep I keep holding onto faith It gets me through the dark And I think to that first moment When we first had our magic spark God, I want to hold you And never let you go And I just think its time We should let the world know We are not giving up No hell we are going to give it our all Giving up is the only way We'll be failures and take the fall Place your hand into my mine Look deep into my eyes And together we will fly Straight into heaven's skies "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 09-27-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Aimster You've poured out your heart and soul with this piece, you have shown every emotion and this piece is truly wonderful...great writings Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Hold on to your faith. Having none is bleak. I like this. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Putting forth the true effort will always give the results needed. Not always the answers you seek but at least there will be no more questions. Wonderful read from you as always. Did I say how glad I am to see you back with us? |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Beautiful, just beautiful. I hate when people tell you what is real and what isnt, if you feel it in you heart, why cant it be real. Great read. Keith Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, if it's meant to be. . . it will be. . . keep fighting and never give up. . . fight with faith, and you'll be flying. . . Excellent my friend. . . your heart really shows here. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Amy--I like the spunk you show...even if you're feeling blue...nice to see you! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Amy, a beauty of a write that's all I will say! Thank you for this read |
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