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Open Poetry #10

Everybody Gets Torn Down

azure
Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 52

0 posted 2000-11-06 02:08 AM

I'm searching now, seeking out
the falling stars that can teach me
to breathe,
this wanting that takes me inevitably to your door.

You song has seduced me,
your language has unearthed
familiar sweet memory,
a man I have loved over and over.

Something I withheld has made me weak,
yet these fragile words, inarticulate,
force me out of my right mind
and into yours, suffering in the tenderness
of that long, lonely kiss.

In your late night bedroom silence,
when you're stretched restless in the dark,
am I?

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-11-06 02:33 AM

Are you quite sure you're not forty years old? LOL....

"Something I withheld has made me weak.."

and the final lines:

"In your late night bedroom silence,
when you're stretched restless in the dark,
am I?"

Did it again, lovie...you post 'em, I'll read 'em...fabulous.

azure
Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 52

2 posted 2000-11-06 02:41 AM

Last I checked, still 23!

Thanks so much (yet again!)for your kind words & support, you're just wonderful girl.

Azure
"I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros

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