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“Across the Miles”
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“Across the Miles” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 Across the miles your voice will call… my hungry heart responds… Before I meet the dawning, you’ll be here where you belong… If only when I close my eyes, I hear your soft familiar sighs…. Our hearts will beat as one… Across the miles… I have needed you a lifetime, but I’ve known you but a year… You have held me with your written love, and I have held you dear… I don’t know why we came to be… I only know what’s right for me… Our love can spread it’s wings… Across the miles… There are oceans deep between us… There are mountains steep and tall… But we still reach out and touch, like they were never there at all… I dream of how my life would feel, if all my dreams of you were real, and someday you will fly… Across the miles… Your letters start a glow in me… I’m happy as a child… My heart is young, in love, and free… You’ve given back my smile… Forever I will love with you… and on to our next lifetime, too… Each day I love you more… Across the miles… Follow your dream! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ This is beautifully done. Soft and tenderly rendered. I'm very taken with it. Great job. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh girl...this one goes deep...hugs my friend |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Marge ~~~ I'm so glad that you read this, and your reply means a great deal, too! Thank you!  ~~~ Paula ~~~ I knew you would know what this one meant! Follow your dream! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, And you have come across with smiles. Wonderful write. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Seymore ~~~ Ahh....thank you!! Love always makes me want to smile!! Follow your dream! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Has a sad beauty about it. Makes a nice poem but would surely be a tough way to love. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Having read me - I've no doubt you know I empathize with these beautiful words - I can feel each heartfelt word. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely Sunny...as always..  and a beautiful visual too..a long distance love is pure torture..~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Love has a way of making the miles seem so far yet it also can make them feel so close at the right times. Wonderful write my sweet sister. You know that I loved it and you know that I know of this feeling as well. Hugs to you and many many thoughts for days of peace for you. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Jamie ~~~ Very tough, indeed, and also very sad.......but isn't love usually both of these at times? Thank you, my good friend! ~~~ Wilfred ~~~ Yes, I know you understand the thoughts that came me while writing, as I've felt the same thing with your wonderful work!! Thank you! ~~~ Victoria ~~~ Ah........I'm glad the graphics caught your eye........but you always do notice, and I put them there for you and those who like them! Thank you!! ~~~ Mark ~~~ Thank you, my dear brother, for the peaceful thoughts.......I can use all the help I can get these days, but then.....can't we all? Your warm thoughts and words are such a welcome sight to these eyes!!! Follow your dream! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - your writings still have the magic that they always have had. Peace go with you. BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, so beautiful, and romantic. I have had the feeling, and it was wonderful. Great poetry Sunny, you always say it like it is, in a special kind of way. Sandra |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Each day I love you more… Across the miles…' Absolutely beautiful, Sunny! I really loved this!! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sunny- oh wow...i can certainly relate to these feelings. As my friend Mark already said, sometimes the miles seem infinite... but other times...especially when we stop and realize that we share the same sky and wish on the same stars...it really doesn't seem so far... i love this. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunny1~ This is so romantic.....such sweetness......I really like this! -SEA |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Bill ~~~ I thank you for your kind reply, and I still highly admire your work also. ~~~ Sandra ~~~ A lot of us can relate to the ache that possibly comes through here. Thank you, my friend for all you've done for me! ~~~ snowpants ~~~ I thank you, too, and am glad that this touched you!! ~~~ vicky ~~~ Ah...that is such a nice thought....that we all wish upon the same stars!! Thank you!! ~~~ SEA ~~~ Romance is the essence of life in my book. Where would we be without it? Thank you!! Follow your dream! |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
You pen such loving images. I would have a lonely heart to accompany the images and many a night of dreaming. Ariana |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Ariana ~~~ Thank you, my friend.....and there has been many a night of dreaming along with the lonely heart. You are very perceptive!! Follow your dream! |
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