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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Love's Little Moments ~*Marge Tindal*~ When in love there are moments that write themselves in your memory book The first smile, the first kiss and always that first look It's often the look that hooks you It holds you mesmerized You are never to be the same you soon come to realize The smile can hold you captive when it's flashed your way And then the kiss Ah, the kiss that takes you completely away After that trio of thrills it's now too late to run Admit it ! You're a goner ! Love has just begun ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I totally agree with you Marge  wonderful poem enjoyed. Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
his voice echoes familiarity surprise of eyes in mirrors seen a vestige of the best of me and tease of things in promise-- like smelling bacon in your sleep and coffee in a tease... a tickling awakening-- a velvet bed of company. Forgive me, mom. Ya inspired some memory in me...lol, impressive feat indeed!!! Thank you for the warm smile this night. I forgot--love is a good thing. HUGS. and thanks. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
looking back-- I can see you are right. Very nicely done Marge Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, I hand you these smilezThis rhyme is just toooo sweet and it reflects an innocence... A trio of thrills and a goner eh...hmmm Now that is appealing so me thinks... You've touched my mushy side today PoetLady  Hugs2U |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- oh, how true it is. i'm lovin' this, my friend! wow...what a feelin' when that trio of thrills comes along...gotta love 'em. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ So pleased you like it. Serenity~ Oh ... I LOVE IT ! Glad to stir a memory, doll ! Prometheus~ Pleased to give you a reason to look back. Thank you, my friend. Dani~ Alright for that mushy side ! I LOVE MUSH ! Vicky~ I love your enthusiasm ! Yep ! Just gotta love 'em ! Thanks, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge* I loved this..the first moments of falling in love are sooooo amazing..the trick is to hold onto those feelings  |
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kelly bo bottoms Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 17 |
Marge- thanks for bringing back to a place I had forgotten.....very well done |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~You're so cute Marge,...thanks for the smile and the memories you've stirred. Sweetness, this is. *Peace you. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is a gem, wonderful Marge Wonderful. That first look, that first kiss, and that first smile. Oh yes I've been hooked. Love this one Marge I really do. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Holding on ! Aye ... that I am ! KellyBo~ Nice to visit the good stuff too, huh ? Glad you enjoyed. SpitFire~ You're welcome for the smile. I do like sharing them. Marsha~ You tickle me - and I like it ! Thanks, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i love that part of the day thanks marge yuh |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
the look - the smile - the kisses - yep - been a goner for some time now. beautiful Marge |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this is just the cutest!!! And so very true -SEA |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Once upon a time, a loooonnnngggg, looonnnnggg time ago.......(it's just a vague memory but, somewhere deep in the recesses.....)This is just wonderful Marge, just love it!!! Bonnie [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Wilfred~ Well ! Good for you, my friend. SEA~ Thank ya', lady. Bonnie~ Okay woman ! Well it can't be tooooooooooooooooooooooo far gone ... ya' found that remember, huh ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Well done Marge A perfect explanation of the trio of thrills Fantastic write my friend ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Gee marge, all I need is the smile and I'm a goner. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
falling in love, what better feeling to have....so wonderfully said Marge~ Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge you have the ability to create such endearing phrases and this poem is just an example of your talent....this kind of creativeness just bubbles out of you like a fountain of words that fall on the page with such feeling....there is so much truth in this work...and it's happened to me I've been smitten and knocked off my feet....tricky stuff that love and when it catches you there's no escaping......ethome |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Yes, it's all in the kiss! Love this poem Marge, another classic from you. Deb |
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