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Ocean Sunsets |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Evenings there upon the cliffs, just at sunset, the pelicans play, the ocean stirs the flow of waves in darkness, running over wet soft earth The soul can be heard, sounds of sea swelling, falling, breathing Rising up on it's haunt against the mouth of the caves, splitting the flowers against the sea colliding with the mountain Gently arousing the flow for the mountain, for the sea to chant your name to the night sky, Your aroma still lingers when I stand there, still on soft ground, still lingers as the ocean mist spreads you over the earth Spreads you over me, I find peace again In memory |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
for the sea to chant your name to the night sky, Your aroma still lingers when I stand there, still on soft ground, still lingers as the ocean mist spreads you over the earth Spreads you over me, I find peace again In memory ================= once again...in your words ... I read me... this is so beautiful and serene ... written like a whispered secret... so nice to see you back and posting again take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
This is beautiful. I love the image you have put forth in my mind. Thank you |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
a haunting beautiful image, almost a secret you have shared. Thank you. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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kelly bo bottoms Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 17 |
makes you feel like you are right there...loved it. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Such tenderly woven memories and emotions...this is so beautiful~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Greeneyes.... Thank you for writing this!! It is so peaceful and beautiful, and written with love. It touched my heart....  Follow your dream! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the comfort that we can find in memory. . . Wonderful Greeneyes. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Green eyes...The imagery in this is so beautiful and your memories make the poem dear. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is beautiful, love the theme and the way it flowed. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very lovely images..enjoyed..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You do paint it so lovely you know. I really loved this one much and it is so nice to read your works again. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very very pretty scenes....takes the reader right there for a relaxing trip...love those ocean sunsets they are magnificent...good work here!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
quite beautiful indeed. a wonderful whispered secret you have shared. glad to see you posting again. your work and you have been missed. lovely writing! take care. amy |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This was so sweetly done...just a breath of a memory..lovely |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
returns to old haunts and memories - remind us that some memories deserve to ber retained Beautiful as always - old friend. ~S~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Thank You all for the warm responses, and please forgive my not being personal with each of you in my response....I do really appreciate a place of poets such as this... Again my sincere thanks Greeneyes ~~~~ "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Greeneyes, this is a seamless write My compliments to you absolutely beautiful Coco |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
CocoBaci~ I appreciate that thank you for your words of kindness...*S* Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know I think you have grown so much in your writing, but this particular one I love, as it feels written for me, Jan, Karen, or anyone that suffered a loss, and yet...I know it was yours. Digging around, and dusting shelves, don't mind me. |
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