Open Poetry #10 |
Passions Gallery--jmlee (it's what is) |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's what is in his words that grabs you first you can see the love that's there on the page and you know that a heart can indeed step out of the dark and walk into the light it's what is in his mind that makes you feel you can feel the love that's coming from his soul and you know that a soul can indeed find a love to keep and share with the world it's what is in his heart that takes you there you can know the love that's shining like a light and you know that a being can indeed have a love so deep and hold it with care so you see it's not what is in his words it's not what is in his mind it's what's in his hMeIaNrAt and when you see what's in his heart, then you'll know who he really is and then you'll know his love for her -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
James will be tickled with this poem Sven.. you captured his sweet personality the way i view him too..loved it.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderfully done!!!! |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I am loving these works of yours. I am also agreeing with them all. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Yep this is James alright...great job Sven |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Oh, yes ... you nailed this one ! And let us not forget a K I S S for sweet James ! Great job, Sven. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Yes, we all have seen what's in James's heart, and it is love You have really done a beautiful job with all these portraits, Sven. They are so much fun to read Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~HUGS~ to both of you Well done again sweet Sven Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Victoria, thank you. . . I'm glad that you liked it. . . deVine. . .thank you! Temptress, glad that you like them all. . . thank you. . . Paula, that's all I need to know. . . thanks. . . Marge, I'll let you give James that kiss ok? thank you my friend. . . Liz, yes, it definitely is love. . .and I'm glad that you're enjoying this series. . . Tracie, thank you my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven all I can say is I Love every tender word you have written and I humbly hope I can live up to the beauty living within these words...Thank you my friend...you have a heart and a soul of the finest Gold..James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven-- this is wonderful and accurately portrays our James. What a huge heart he indeed does have. But then again so do you! I am really enjoying this Passions Gallery...only you could pull off something so well. genius poet, you are with a huge heart of gold, just like James said. God Bless ya my friend. Take care. Amy |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sir Sven, methinks thou must be a peasant seer for thou hast portrayed to an inch the character of the the love thou hast seen and thou hast honestly reflected that in thy art. Be well Keth Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, thank you my friend. . . he does have a wonderful heart. . . glad that you're enjoying this. . . Kethry, good poet, I am not a seer, I am only he that sees, and I thank thee friend for thy words. . . James, I'm quite sure that you already do live up to every word. . . you have a heart of gold my friend. . . and I'm very glad that you have found someone to share that heart with. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Sven, you've such an interesting penchant for poetic portraiture. This poem about James is wonderful, and though I don't know him as well as all of you do, he certainly seems like a treasure. So nice! Rainydays |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sven~ this is so sweet.....James is an angel among us with a huge heart full of love....fantastic poem!! -SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See what happens, James...when you write so well... you get Svened! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Rainydays, yes he is indeed a treasure. . . and I'm sure that many would agree. . . SEA, he does indeed have a heart full of love, and I'm glad that he has someone to share it with. . . Sunshine, remember the words that you speak my friend. . . James won't be the only one! -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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