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Moonlight's Spill (Part Two)
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Moonlight's Spill (Part Two) |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
I'm sorry for the delay in getting this written...but the goodnews is I've outlived the flu! (I think) Take care all, and thank you SO MUCH for your wonderful responses to Part One!  "Moonlight's Spill" (Part Two) Within your arms my doubts dissolve as love flows, liquid, to our kiss with little left of will's resolve So many nights desiring this! So many days of timid glance then growing gazes, friendship's trust tonight we twirled at Harvest dance the music moving passion's thrust And offering hand in mock escape, you drew me to this quiet path as love emerged beneath the drape of moon's cascading bouyant bath Now pounding of my heart implies like mounting beats upon a drum with tender surges of our sighs enslaved to moonlight I've become Rainydays |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
just as lovely as the first...you are on a roll, enjoy the moon's light... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Thank you, Sunshine. Enjoying the sun's light too! Take care, Rainydays |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Beautifully written Rainy the moon can cast a magical spell. You have captured that magic Rich |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Very enchanting. a beautiful walk you have taken us. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enslaved to moonlight ..aren't we all? Lovely words ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
The moon is enchanting, as was this poem. Thanks for filling us in on the sequel! Hope that you're over the flu., too. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Spiked, yes, isn't the moon magical? Thank you for letting me know you read and enjoyed my poem. Ron, thank you. Someday I hope to actually take this walk too. Wynter, yes, I think we are in many ways. Moonlight certainly has its pull and we have but to allow it. Thank you for reading! Elizabeth, thank you so much for your sweet reply. I am working on getting over it, but still writing from bed. But I'm restless, which is a good sign! Thanks a bunch for reading! Rainydays |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Within your arms my doubts dissolve as love flows, liquid, to our kiss with little left of will's resolve So many nights desiring this! ================ Now pounding of my heart implies like mounting beats upon a drum with tender surges of our sighs enslaved to moonlight I've become =============== RD this is sensual and soft and very well expressed ... you have written many of the emotions I have been feeling of late ... the desire and longing of wanting to be with that special someone ... the chemistry ... I live with the ache beautiful poetry jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Soft caress of Luna's tender touch I never knew that I could love this much Within the light dancing in your eyes I see the love I searched for in moonlit cries ================================= ahhhhhh my sweet friend.....you know that after the first one inspired me that I would have to write one in response to this one as well didn't you? I know that it will not shine as brightly as yours but I do hope that you don't mind me doing so. This was lovely and I shall do my best to come up with one just as close to the beauty that you paint as I can. Whew....you don't make it easy do you? LOL |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rainy days--This is a sensual delight with lovely touches of imagery..wonderfully done! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Because I want to  ----besides, it needs to be seen by many more poets my friend. |
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