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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2000-11-05 06:10 PM



For whtdove
loved the way described it hon
just had to share it  


Through Your Eyes


I have not the words, nor time or silence
to pen the beauty I have just witnessed
right out my window facing the back yard
splashes of cloud white, across the blue sky
a huge bright orange ball over the horizon is
slipping away quickly, it's fire almost gone
I see it, fading fast but the glow still stands,
to the sky it spreads, only the tip is left a
most beautiful sunset has just occurred and
I have not the words, nor time or silence



Thanks for showing me Angel

Maree  


[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-05-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-11-05 06:18 PM


This is magnificent, Maree! Very lovely!

Denise

Alle'cram
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2 posted 2000-11-05 06:20 PM


Maree, This is beautiful!! WhtDove is one of my favorite people, so to me, this is very special and thanks for the look.   Love, Marcy

"I have not the words, nor time or silence
to pen the beauty I have just witnessed"

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2000-11-05 06:21 PM


Beautiful Maree! What a vivid picture you've painted here, just lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dark Angel
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4 posted 2000-11-05 06:28 PM


Thank you all for your lovely replies.
Whtdove painted this picture for me, she described a beautiful sunset happening as we spoke and I wanted to share it with you all, so the credit goes to her  

Thanks Angel  

Jamie
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Blue Heaven
5 posted 2000-11-05 06:32 PM


from a white dove to a dark angel to the thankful eyes of the masses.... you never disappoint Maree..


Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-11-05 06:34 PM


isn't it wonderful when we gain in the spirit of a friend, shared?  Well done!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2000-11-05 06:53 PM


DA,

Breathtaking view my friend!!  Superb images.  I enjoyed them a bunch tonight.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

WhtDove
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8 posted 2000-11-05 08:12 PM


Maree I'm surprised and oh so thankful!
You've done the beauty much justice, and brought the beauty of all it all flooding back.

Thanks sooooo much my sweet friend, for putting into words what I could not.
HUGz

Poet deVine
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9 posted 2000-11-05 08:18 PM


Maree, this is beautiful!  
WhtDove
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10 posted 2000-11-05 08:38 PM


Ok, Maree!  Here's the story folks...that Maree has already gone into.

I was talking to her earlier as I was sitting at my puter watching the sunset outside. I was telling her about it all, and describing it. She told me to write about it and share it, but I had to go. I had laundry to do, and dinner to cook, and with 3 kids, I just don't have the peace and quiet nor the time to sit and put thought into it.

So that is what she's done here for me, much to my surprise! She's brought the entire conversation, put it on paper, and brought it to life for me!

Thanks again Maree! Love ya and big HUGS!!

Sven
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11 posted 2000-11-05 08:46 PM


The power of the written word. . .

Beautiful Maree. . . just beautiful. . .  

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Dark Angel
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12 posted 2000-11-06 04:57 AM


Jamie, Sunshine, LW, Ms deVine, and Sven thanks all for popping in and taking a look at Becky's Sunset  

Becky,no need to thank me, it is I who thanks you  
Love ya too hon, big HUGS  
Ribbit, Ribbit ribbit  

Maree< !signature-->

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"


[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-06-2000).]

tracie66
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13 posted 2000-11-06 06:28 AM


Quite simply
BEAUTIFUL
....well done little one
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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