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Through your eyes ( for WhtDove )
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Through your eyes ( for WhtDove ) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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For whtdove loved the way described it hon just had to share it  Through Your Eyes I have not the words, nor time or silence to pen the beauty I have just witnessed right out my window facing the back yard splashes of cloud white, across the blue sky a huge bright orange ball over the horizon is slipping away quickly, it's fire almost gone I see it, fading fast but the glow still stands, to the sky it spreads, only the tip is left a most beautiful sunset has just occurred and I have not the words, nor time or silence Thanks for showing me Angel Maree [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is magnificent, Maree! Very lovely! Denise |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Maree, This is beautiful!! WhtDove is one of my favorite people, so to me, this is very special and thanks for the look. Love, Marcy "I have not the words, nor time or silence to pen the beauty I have just witnessed" |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Maree! What a vivid picture you've painted here, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all for your lovely replies. Whtdove painted this picture for me, she described a beautiful sunset happening as we spoke and I wanted to share it with you all, so the credit goes to her Thanks Angel |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
from a white dove to a dark angel to the thankful eyes of the masses.... you never disappoint Maree.. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
isn't it wonderful when we gain in the spirit of a friend, shared? Well done! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
DA, Breathtaking view my friend!! Superb images. I enjoyed them a bunch tonight. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Maree I'm surprised and oh so thankful! You've done the beauty much justice, and brought the beauty of all it all flooding back. Thanks sooooo much my sweet friend, for putting into words what I could not. HUGz |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Maree, this is beautiful!  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ok, Maree! Here's the story folks...that Maree has already gone into. I was talking to her earlier as I was sitting at my puter watching the sunset outside. I was telling her about it all, and describing it. She told me to write about it and share it, but I had to go. I had laundry to do, and dinner to cook, and with 3 kids, I just don't have the peace and quiet nor the time to sit and put thought into it. So that is what she's done here for me, much to my surprise! She's brought the entire conversation, put it on paper, and brought it to life for me! Thanks again Maree! Love ya and big HUGS!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The power of the written word. . . Beautiful Maree. . . just beautiful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jamie, Sunshine, LW, Ms deVine, and Sven thanks all for popping in and taking a look at Becky's Sunset Becky,no need to thank me, it is I who thanks you Love ya too hon, big HUGS Ribbit, Ribbit ribbit Maree< !signature--> "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Quite simply BEAUTIFUL ....well done little one Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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