Open Poetry #10 |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
since you left [stop] am doing fine [stop] finally stopped caring [stop] not sure when [stop] doesn't matter [stop] I guess [stop] all is fine now [stop] doesn't hurt at all [stop] or should I say anymore [stop] (than before)[stop] only one problem now [stop] need a plumber [stop] ASAP[stop] sprung a leak [stop] in my eyes [stop] can't make it [stop] [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corazon~ What a clever idea. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very clever idea and such thoroughnessin pulling it through. Wonderful penning from you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If this was in response to Mr. Bohannan's challenge for imagery, I say you did just fine...and if this was a clue as to your imagination alone, I would say, excellent! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Corazon, sounds like an ... --- ... to me. Excellent, as always, my friend |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Creative...James |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Corazon Great idea.(stop) But really, this was very unique and I liked the imagery included within. I especially liked the last 5 lines. The last "stop" just put this excellent poem over the top. "Need a plumber(stop)" "ASAP(stop)" "Sprung a leak(stop)" "in my eyes(stop)" "can't make it(stop)" Garfield |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Very uniquely creative..........I hope that is good english....lol.....just in case it's not..... VERY GOOD! Jenn E |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thank you all so much, and guess i will have to hang on to the creative tag, cause i didn't even know there was a visual challenge, I just don't have enough time to be here anymore but thanks again |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Hello Corazon, Your presentation is very fitting. The clipped tone suits your message perfectly. Enjoyed! ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Great idea, Corazon. I especially like the way all the lines rhyme. That's not always easy, yanno! Terrific idea, this poem. |
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minstrel Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 21Bowling Green, KY |
Very unique and creative. Nice work. minstrel |
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