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Winter Kissed
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Winter Kissed |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I tilt my face upwards Cool fingers of a solstice day trace me Caress my desires A snowflake drifts downward An angel of heavenly symmetry To land upon my lips I’ve been Winter kissed. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Ron-- this is so beautiful. with few words you have penned something that i know many here will like quite a lot! some thing about your style really makes me smile...awesome, this is! take care. ~amy~  |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
What a beautiful image, Ron!! Great write!! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i hope winter doesnt kiss me yet haa..love it Ron.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You must know I couldn't resist this one Ron  I tilt my face upwards Cool fingers of a solstice day trace me Caress my desires A snowflake drifts downward An angel of heavenly symmetry To land upon my lips I’ve been Winter kissed. so very lovely, Ron. For you: Catching Kisses Softly, floating, downward, gently Catching kisses, wet and cold. Landing, melting, warming, feeling Kisses, snowflakes, each to hold. Reaching out and touching, pressing Fingertips, on cheeks, on lips. Tasting whiteness, cool, refreshing Moments, special, temperature dips. Oh the beauty, tree in dusting, Sparkling shine and glowing white. Thirty foot of evergreen, waiting Feathered kisses, of this night. Standing out on grounds of softness, Limbs outstretched for starshine's touch. Far and wide is seen the beauty, Nature's treasures, whitened much. Softly, floating, downward, gently Each designed, not one the same. Beauty, eyes behold the wonder Kisses soft, on this night came. a touch of ~Wynter's Kiss < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very nice Ron; very nice! jwesley |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
And the kiss of winter's beauty shall rest within my heart until the dawn of spring. Beautiful! Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Ron! Very nice! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ron, what a way to welcome winter...lovely, lovely images... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Thank you everyone...and you also Wynter.. you gave me the inspiration. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ron, I have sometimes been noted as being very prolific...the first time I heard it I had to run to the dictionary to see what it meant...I thought someone was name-calling. Thank you...you are very sweet~Wynter in a land of Wonder "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ron - I like your style, and your writing. I sent you an e-mail message. BC |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a stunning visual you've painted here Ron ... absolutely beautiful and vivid. Much enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~You have captured this,...beautifully. Absolutely. Thank you. *Peace. |
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