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The Dance
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The Dance |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Aglaia sings her love's reprise, Amid the stars of midnight skies, Rising passions of the night, As two are on in Luna's light, Embraced in dance to music's sway, In rhapsody of love's ballet, Notes from forth celestial harp, Breech stone walls of heart's escarp, With soft caress, sweet harmonies, Kiss on the soul, night's symphonies, From forth your lips, love's madrigal, Upon my ears, Erato's call, Beauty of your bloom replendent, Encaptured in your love transcendent, As mold as one in warm embrace, In lover's waltz of heaven's grace. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sounds idyllic Mike. Chris |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--Beautiful display of words...and you are the star on the dance floor this night. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Chris... appreciate the reply... danke. Martie...thank you kind lady... will you save a dance for me? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Idyallic but well said, my friend. Agree with Martie..."...star...of the dance..." jwesley |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
this dance must pirouette right back to the top...for it is lovely, indeed... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A dance of sweet words belongs in the spotlight, consider yourself bumped(wasn't that an 80's dance move?) Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So lovely, Mike, may I have the next dance?!  Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
jwesley...appreciate the reply...thank you. Sunshine... it is nice to get a lovely from a lovely lady from Kansas... Ron... thank you for the reply, glady you enjoyed... Denise... I would be honored to share the next dance with such a charming lady... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mike* This is beautiful...I can hear the music and see the exquisite scene as it plays itself out under the star...A dance that should never end. Stunning work~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Perfection again, Mike...this one took me away for a bit. Loved the symolism,and the flow is exquisite, as always. |
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