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Lovers Dance |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan 
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Close your eyes to all that draws you from me, focus, instead on the picture of me in your mind. Imagine with all your heart that I am with you, feel me, tender caresses tracing your spine. Fingertip soft as rose petals tracing circles, followed by kisses moist against your chest. And you rise up to the reality of the illusion. Shhhh! Quiet now, lay back, I want you to rest. Let me bring you into a peace filled with ecstasy. Let me guide you to pleasure beyond all your dreams. And my lips will come to know you most intimately. As the sun rises past the moon whispered lovers screams. Let your hands find their way up through the darkness. And find the lightness, the coolness of my skin. And as the sun shines golden through the open windows. Let us start this dance of lovers, once again. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
This is a dance that could (DOES) replace the tango and the lambada as the sexiest of dances ~S~ Bravo Encore! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Great writing! I was drawn in by every single line! Enjoyed it a lot!! sp  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH BABY!!!! this is SOOOO sensual and so sincere .. THIS is my kinda poetry ... very nice read...VERY ... well written and defined .. felt like i was there watching hope ya dont mind *smile* (just kidding) take care jm |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Wow! Thank you all for having a look! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
First off let me offer a belated welcome to Passions. This was some dance. Definitely a dance for lovers only. You are steaming up the screen here with this one. I will have to make sure to stop by frequently. Superb write!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Goodness, I can hear these words put together with mood music, I felt like I was floating, wonderful!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The band is beginning again my friend. . . This is just wonderful. . . there's nothing like floating and moving in the dance. . . Well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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