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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Hyacinth and peppermint. What she said and what she meant. Love and friendship shifted, rent. So this is what the angels sent. Broken wings and feathers burned. What we did and what we learned. Sex, starlight, security spurned. I went dead when her back turned. I hope to find someone new. To know the greens, reds and blues. Not just bonds turned back to glue. I'll love her like I loved you. And when its time to say goodbye, I won't lie or die, just cry. Someday, maybe, those too will go And we can just say hello. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
bsquirrel, this is a heart breaker, my man. wow, i know this feeling, like the back of my hand. Keep it going. ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hyacinth and peppermint. What she said and what she meant. Love and friendship shifted, rent. So this is what the angels sent. Broken wings and feathers burned. What we did and what we learned. Sex, starlight, security spurned. I went dead when her back turned. ============== Oh baby...ya break me heart .. Mike this is so...so....YOU ... gawwd i love the way you write... and ya write me heart in this melancholy gem ... take care sweet squirrel .. love ya me |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mike* You reached in and grabbed my heart... this was so painfilled...from your heart and soul you've penned...you've purged the pain to make room for the sunlight...now let it in. Awesome writing~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSquirrel~ The rawness of your emotions makes for a heart-rendering read. This is good. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ron, Well, the back of your hand is better than her turned back.  I appreciate it.Butterfly Slippers, Yo, girl! Thanks for readin', and glad to know my words touched you. B_d_c, Thanks for the advice. Marge, Thanks for making me smile. Mike |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
bsquirrel, hi. A rhythmic bitterness, written well. Take care, Rainydays |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
the clip and patter of the words keeps the "and" alive in hope... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Rainyday and Sunshine (I love the irony of those two names together), Thanks! Mike |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Geez, mike, where have I been? this is bittersweet. "So this is what the angels sent." Incredible line, that. you spoke my thoughts with that. love to ya, hugs...and thanks... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike~ this is heart-wrenching......so very sad........sending you warm hugs...I enjoyed this very much...  -SEA |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Mike-So sad and sweet, I know this feeling, you've captured it well. Hugs my friend, nicely written. |
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