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Falling Haiku |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Falling Haiku wind and leaves blow 'round capering up, then straight down like little clowns yellow gold and red leaves briskly frisk around heads children jump with joy gray clouds usher snow blankets of white to cover once scampering leaves Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nice job, this is good. Great images of the season  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sunshine~ Beautiful haiku The images you have shown just lovely..well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I can see leaves and children dancing. the last dance before winter. very nice. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fall is such a lovely time, isn't it? These are lovely too, Karilea! Denise |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Lakewalker... Tracie, fall provides the images, we provide the words... so can I, Ron, so can I... thank you, denise {~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
great - simply great - I'd try more haiku - but so often they turn into senryu's ~G~ - you did these most beautifully |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
You provided beautiful words for autumn's images. Nicely done! Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful words; beautiful images; well done, my friend. jwesley |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats, Elizabeth, James, thank you for sharing this one with me... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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