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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-11-04 07:02 AM


Long John Ag and Lorelei54 are due to return today. I wanted to write something sweet and sincere to welcome them back. Instead my pen wrote this.  

Lorelei had been ill, with sniffles she did cough
Long John like a hero, agreed to shopping and set off
In the early morning off to the super-mart
He loaded lots of cough medicine in the wonky shopping cart
He also loaded aspirin, honey and some lemon
When he made his lemon specialty, Lorelei would think it heaven

The shopping all completed, Long John began to walk
He chatted with the children and stopped with all to talk
All the morning, he sauntered, enjoyed the springtime wind
Not one thought for Lorelei, at home and sick, in this he sinned

Then Long John stopped, his stomach growled, it was time to dine
With his al fresco dining, he'd also have some wine
So he supped and sat a while, enjoying all the view
Not one thought of Lorelei at home in bed with the flu.

He sat and supped and drank his wine
Enjoyed the fish on which he dined
Paid the bill and then reclined
In the springtime to unwind

Late afternoon John came home, to find Lorelei not amused
Now he was in trouble and would need a good excuse
As he unpacked the shopping to silence hard as stone
He noticed all the lemons and a tale began to grow

My dear you cannot blame me for being late you see
I've been wrongfully imprisoned, a misunderstanding became a tragedy
A policeman had accosted me while loading up the car
And I got such a fright,… I dropped my bag and jar

As I tried to gather up the things, the lemons all fell out
I tripped and was arrested before I could raise a shout
To prove my innocence took all afternoon, you see
Until the magistrate saw my face and promptly set me, free

Lorelei laughed out loud and said, Long John I think you're slipping
If you're going to tell me, you were jailed for acid tripping



Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

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Lorelei54
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458

1 posted 2000-11-04 08:06 AM


Thanks for welcoming us home in style and for remembering that today was the day.  Our trip was great, but home is sweet.
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2000-11-04 10:07 AM


Kethry: LOL If you would of wrote something sweet I would of thought you were acid tripping. Enjoyed the poem.
peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
3 posted 2000-11-04 10:17 AM


Oh, I still think this is sweet!!!  But then, I have such a weird sense of humor  laughs

I enjoyed reading

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2000-11-04 04:19 PM


Lorelei54,
thanks for coming back.

Inot2B.
thanks, acid trip, acid drops what's the difference?

Pepper, me too.   (about the weird I mean)

Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-11-04 04:23 PM


~Hey you,...you are just soOo cute and clever and fun to have around. Enjoyed you and your wit Kethry. You be taking care of yourself ya hear? *Peace.
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2000-11-04 04:45 PM


Thanks Fire,
always a pleasure to hear from you. You take care of you, ok!
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

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