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Can't Sing Goodbye
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Can't Sing Goodbye |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
"Can't Sing Goodbye" The days slip into sunsets since your leaving came along nothing written nothing said I cannot sing this into song I can sing about the wars and about the pulling of the tides and about the rotten way that lovers make us cry but I just can't bring myself to sing goodbye I can sing of wayward women and of rakes and rowdy men in all the songs I'm singing honey I'm just trying to pretend that you'll be right there when I come home again When the heart is pulled in two you know it's got to be a crime don't know how to keep on singing without the other half of mine ...just a li'l song Rainydays [This message has been edited by Rainydays (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lets just say it's another rainy day. Well done. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
a heart wrenching tune you have sung. This fellow now has the blues. keep singing. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
When love is gone..everyday is a dark rainyday..enjoyed..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Thanks fellas, sometimes love hurts. Victoria, amen. take care all ~ Rainydays |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Rainydays, A nice read , but sad. Kinda reminds me of the jukebox in the corner and salty beer. Doc |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I can't imagine the pain of not having someone to come home to. Take care, Rainydays. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Doc, thanks for reading. Yes, definitely a beer and salty jukebox song. Elizabeth, here's hoping you won't have to know it. Take care, and thanks for reading. Rainydays |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
This is a sad and beautiful story of love and loss. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This song I will not allow myself to sing As the loss of you leaves quite a sting I will sing instead of memories so sweet Taking my time in rhyme til in heaven we meet The love for you will never find an end I will not give in, nor try to pretend My heart will forever hold you close at hand As I refuse to sing to a loveless band. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Some great lyrics here....I like the way you explain your way through it and the rhythum is good....this work fits in with your title rainydays......good bluesy stuff...keep on keepin on!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
RD* This is pure beauty...you wove the heartache and pain of saying goodbye to someone you love with exquisite care...excellent work~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rainydays, perfectly sung blues. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This makes a terrific song! I can almost hear the music WEll done! Liz |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
A Whisper's Caress, thank you. Yes, a sad song. Funny how sadness can so easily turn into music, isn't it? Mark, spoiling me again with another poetic response, and naturally it is uplifting and sweet. Thank you so much for this one. (and every one) ethome, the music has been a bit rainy for me lately, but the sun's going to have to show up sooner or later. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it. Butterflies Don't Cry, thank you for such a sweet response. I was hoping the love would come out in this one. Kethry, thank you very much, but you haven't heard me sing yet. (smiling) Elizabeth, thanks for reading. Music, to me, is sometimes just the most fitting outlet for poetic thought. Thanks everyone, and take care ~ Rainydays |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rainydays - I can relate to your writing. It is very difficult to sing about goodbye. But, may your heart sing. Bill |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainyDays~ When the blues comes along I just sing it Belt it out loud and long For melancholy best knows the chorus of a heart without a song And then - Croon a tune that rains with willow-weeping sigh On the heart it will break into a sad goodbye Or- Take a little sad song give it a melody Share it with another heart who might sing it merrily *Well .... thanks for these little inspirations ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Because it is not time to sing good-bye just yet and because I can bump when I want to LOL. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i cant say yuh to make yuh feel better hmmm yuh yuh yuh feel better yuh nice one |
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