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last moon of narcissus |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
 last moon of narcissus again, night waters grow dark with the sky awaiting his friend of reflection's own eye and together, they shine for hours on end one smile, one ripple, to each they send their silence is secret, except for the moon who hears their quiet and remains marooned up in the sky -- night's twins on his mind never to tell of a love born blind for dawn's awakening, too soon it arrives one smile, one ripple, one self-love dies m.a. miller 11.02.00 My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ah, the graphic art of penning art... you did this, and you did it quite well, indeed. I like it, can you tell? Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey you...now who'd digging deep? smiles--- this is fantastic, and it really applies to something in my life right now...so *click* into the library with you!!! Great work, Mark. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MA Miller, Nice echo of the deep river's lie. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautifully written MM..and love the painting too..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
M.A., what an excellent interpretation. Classic, somewhat mystic, really cool. Rainydays |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MAMiller~ Absolutely enchanting. The grapic and the poem go together so well. Applauding here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderfully done, MA...and beautiful graphics. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thanks to all above for taking the time to read ... i think there's a we bit of Narcissus in all of us |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
mesmerising poetry. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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