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Charisma
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0 posted 2000-11-03 08:03 AM


art:Jim warren

You give me wings

You give me wings, so I can fly
explore with you the space in the sky,
our passions, our love that lead our flight,
together we're soaring to cherish height.


Without your love, where should I be,
your wings of love, that carries me,
when days are filled with pain and sorrow,
you give me faith to face tomorrow.


You give me your unselfish care,
the precious love that we might share,
your tender arms when they hold me tight,
within your love I lost my fright.


You give me strength, you give me faith,
your love for me was always straight,
you carried me through heavy days,
enclosed me with your warm embrace.


Yes with you I will take this flight,
soaring high while sharing height,
that's the only place were I want to be,
knowing that you look after me.

Charisma






[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 11-03-2000).]

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2000-11-03 09:07 AM


Charisma - fly with your wings, as this is one beautiful writing. Thanks for sharing this.

Bill

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2 posted 2000-11-03 09:09 AM


Charisma~
Sharing this one with the gals at the office.
We're enjoying the soft beauty of your thoughts.
Thanks for the charmer !
~*Marge*~


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juliet_2u
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3 posted 2000-11-03 09:15 AM


Charisma, this is just lovely. It brought back some wonderful memories for me.
Love & hugs,
Juls

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4 posted 2000-11-03 09:22 AM


Oh Charisma ~ What beautiful wings they are! This is absolutely wonderful.  Bonnie
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5 posted 2000-11-03 05:50 PM


Bill: thank you for your kind words  

Marge: I am honoured that you shared this one with the galls on your office, and enjoyed reading this...thank you for your compliment, witch I really appreciate  

Juliet: I'm glad that it brought some memories back...thank you for taking time to read and reply. ((hugs))

BSC: thank you..for your lovely reply...


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6 posted 2000-11-03 10:35 PM



This is absolutely beautiful Charisma! I
loved the emotion and the imagery in it and
your graphic was stunning!! Where do you
find these!!!

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7 posted 2000-11-03 11:04 PM


this is so good. so beautiful. and the graphics to add the touch. nicely done. Ron

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


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8 posted 2000-11-04 01:52 PM


Butterfly: I am glad that you loved this one, and the graphics were found on the net, I have several links on my homepage...
some of the graphics I collect, simply because I loved them,I have done that before I wrote poetry....and after all, the graphics  make it complete.

Ron: thank you for your kind reply..I am glad that you like it, and appreciate your reply very much.  

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