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Fee
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2000-11-03 01:40 AM



Emotions run high,
when your mind is set free.

I cherish the thoughts  
that you share with me.

Nothing left unsaid,
not even a word.
Capturing thoughts
not spoken but heard.

Closer we become
each time we speak.
With topics and thoughts
which run so deep.

No boundaries or cares
of what you may say.
To express thoughts
in our own way.

Our Friendship is special
don't ever change
here for you always
I will remain



Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

© Copyright 2000 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
Toddles
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since 2000-07-24
Posts 396
New Orleans, Louisiana
1 posted 2000-11-03 01:46 AM


Very well expressed & touching words!!!


Todd-Michael Phillips...A Passion's Resident Poet since 5/19/1999

Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-11-03 11:13 AM


Hi Fee,

This is wonderful poetry, sometimes its hard to find someone else that you can talk to about anything and I am happy that you found someone like that, so much enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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