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Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
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0 posted 2000-10-29 02:01 PM


It is an illusion
Through which we gaze
Silky veiled deceptions
Eerily floating
Above transparent dreams
Haunting visions
Misted eyes
Smoky ruins
Of a heart that's died.



Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-10-29 02:04 PM


What a great response!!  You are da man today for sure.  Wonderfully written
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2000-11-03 10:55 AM


Ron, how disconsolate...but how well said...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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