Open Poetry #10 |
Night Vision |
seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Night Vision If I should dream you, a vision at night, veiled by the darkness, emitting a light, that draws me to you, I, the moth to your flame, wrapped in your wings, as you whisper my name, breathless and needing, against my hair, my face. falling together, in a quiet place, where I know in my heart, you are never from sight, kept safely harbored in a vision at night. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Welcome to Passions, Seraphin! I loved this poem! Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oohhh I love this poems cryptic mystic feel very cool poem... sensual and intense welcome to passions new poet nice to have you here look forward to more of your work take care jm |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
lovely lovely lovely... well written verse... please be comfortable here... i would like to read more... |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Thank you. While very new, I DO love it here. How could I not, when I am surrounded by the most wonderful writings! I'm not even sure how I found my way to you, but am very grateful I to be here. @}~~>~~~~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
this is first class writing - I too hope to read much more of your work! ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Oh my! Thank you again! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is nice work Seraphin...reminds me of a waterfall of words... K "He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I knew that when I saw your name, that I would love what I was about to read. Seraphin, I was right Wonderful writing indeed, your words just flow beautifully. Looking out for more of your work Maree |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi Seraphin, this is absolutely lovely... Coco |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Thank you, Coco! |
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