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seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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0 posted 2000-09-26 03:33 PM


Night Vision


If I should
dream you,
a vision
at night,
veiled by the darkness,
emitting a light,
that draws me to you,
I, the moth
to your flame,
wrapped in your
wings,
as you
whisper
my name,
breathless
and needing,
against
my hair,
my face.
falling together,
in a quiet place,
where I know
in my heart,
you are never
from sight,
kept safely
harbored
in a vision
at night.


© Copyright 2000 Sandra McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-09-26 04:42 PM


Welcome to Passions, Seraphin! I loved this poem!  

Elizabeth


Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near...
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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-09-26 06:55 PM


oohhh I love this poems cryptic mystic feel
very cool poem...
sensual and intense
welcome to passions new poet
nice to have you here
look forward to more of your work
take care
jm

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
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3 posted 2000-09-26 07:04 PM


lovely lovely lovely... well written verse... please be comfortable here... i would like to read more...  
seraphin
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4 posted 2000-09-26 07:22 PM


Thank you. While very new, I DO love it here. How could I not, when I am surrounded by the most wonderful writings! I'm not even sure how I found my way to you, but am very grateful I to be here. @}~~>~~~~
Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
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Wilmington, Delaware
5 posted 2000-09-26 11:49 PM


this is first class writing - I too hope to read much more of your work!

~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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6 posted 2000-09-27 12:11 PM


Oh my! Thank you again!
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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7 posted 2000-09-27 12:29 PM


This is nice work Seraphin...reminds me of a waterfall of words...

K

"He looked across the
silky surface of the Severn...
it was a famously difficult
river with fierce tides..."


From Jack Maggs


Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

8 posted 2000-09-27 12:35 PM


I knew that when I saw your name, that I would love what I was about to read. Seraphin, I was right   Wonderful writing indeed, your words just flow beautifully. Looking out for more of your work  

Maree

CocoBaci
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9 posted 2000-11-05 02:09 AM


hi Seraphin, this is absolutely lovely...

Coco

seraphin
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10 posted 2000-11-05 11:05 AM


Thank you, Coco!
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