Love & Other Cosmic Catastrophes

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Open Poetry #10

Love & Other Cosmic Catastrophes

azure
Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 52

0 posted 2000-11-02 08:14 PM

Swooping down like a bird, he plucked me
from my sticky swamp, my fear; his kiss
was a cannonball in the rust of my tears.
A melody, he filled my ears with moon, gently
stretched my body into the sea, held my laughter
in his hands, spun dandelions in me.
Found in each other strange rainbows,
careful wonderings, old verses of poetry;
he breathed me.
Somehow
got lost in mystic impossible,
overwhelmed by realms of we -
he slipped like a bright fish from my grasp,
dissolved in a lavender dream.

I am suffocated by memory.

Azure
"I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-11-02 08:18 PM

Hi, this is the first poem of yours I have read. I love it! First of all, the title is too perfect, and oh, the suffocation of memory! You made some very strong visuals here. Great.
Sandra

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-11-02 10:52 PM

Azure~
Oh ... swim through these lovely memories.
Surface and breathe ...
This is sadly lovely.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-11-03 02:36 PM

oh, but you've touched me with this. Wrote my heart, you did. "spun dandelions in me..." that's just beautiful!!!

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2000-11-03 03:48 PM

Azure, the rhymes your wrote were very good...I loved that dandelion line....you're a great poet and I would love to read more of your work.

Nathan

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

5 posted 2000-11-04 04:05 AM

Very touching and beautiful sweetie, Loved every word of it

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