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Until The Likes Of You |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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It was a hex, it was a curse ~ A magic spell I swear it's true nothing ever scared me like this until the likes of you I've been bewitched, I've been bamboozled someone has been messin with my mind Did you see it? I can't believe it!! My heart I cannot find! It was here until I met you until I looked into your eyes then without a sound, without pain and much to my suprise Now it's gone,but it feels so good What ever will I do? I've never been in love like this until the likes of you. -SEA- |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Good work Sea, I liked the last verse especially. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey Sea,...this reads so well. Could just hear the speaker speaking. I like that. Very neat read. *Peace. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Elizabeth~ thank you very much, I'm glad you liked  SpitFire~ Cool...thanks -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA this is excellant, a very very good poem. I really like this, if fact I love it. Beautifully put together, well done. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Don't be afraid ... look deep into my eyes The security of love and passionate bliss Lies within these walls of heartfelt cries As I bestow upon you one big cowboy kiss Your heart rests safe in the grasps of mine There is no curse nor is there a magic spell Just reach down deep and let our love shine Lift your eyes to mine to see your heart is well |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~thank you, glad you liked this Mark~ Ok, not just a *SIGH* but now you got a *SWOONIN*  Beautiful, thank you. By the way, when am I gonna get a full length poem from you, to me?  -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ This is just adorable ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My friend I will give you a "FULL Length" anytime. (poem that is ) Just let a day or two go by and you will see. So what format would you like it in my friend? Typical me, 2-line, 4-line, free verse,acrostic, or maybe even a prose. Shortened prose for open 10. You name it my friend. Now shall I catch you while you are swooning?LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Very nice enjoyed the read. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ thank you for reading Mark~ Well, I like it all ways, so you pick, I know I'll just love it Too late~ I'm on the floor! Seymour~ cool, I'm happy you liked this. -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Scooping you up and kissing all of your bruises....boy you sure got alot of them from one tiny fall.LOL...Yeah, I know you can't see them, but trust me they are there and I need to kiss them before they get worse.    ...oooooooohhhhh , look at that one....mmmmmm gotta kiss THAT one. |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
*AHEM*!!!! If you two are done now.... great poem. It read so well and I can totally identify. Krissie I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making you lose ur way I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel ~Touch and Go |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You missed one.. -SEA ( good night off to dreamland for me) [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
mmmmmmmm oh yes, that one is a big one...I may have to kiss that on "ALL" night ... you just rest in your dreams my dear and I will take care of the bruise. Got to admit, this one taste a might sweeter than the others. |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Enjoyable reading Sea, soft and gliding! Robert Joseph |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
WOW....amazing write Sea...sometimes all it takes is the touch of the one we are meant to be with to find what was always there....very excellent work~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Definitely sounds like you got a little bewitched there, sea. Watch out for that hocus pocus |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is seriously sweet...love it Sea |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
There's magic afoot here for sure; it came from your pen Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
An adorable write Sea Me giggling can't ya tell Coco |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent writing Sea!! wonderful presentation, such depth and intensity...good work!! |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
SEA this is a lovely poem! Thanks Jon |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am back baby....just not in force yet, but wanted you to know that "we" are not a curse lol.....hugs to you sweet friend and yes I miss you too. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I've been bewitched, I've been bamboozled someone has been messin with my mind Did you see it? I can't believe it!! My heart I cannot find!' I know EXACTLY what you mean, SEA! Great poem!! Love it!! sp Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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