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SEA
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0 posted 2000-10-22 02:54 PM



It was a hex, it was a curse ~ A magic spell
I swear it's true
nothing ever scared me like this
until the likes of you

I've been bewitched, I've been bamboozled
someone has been messin with my mind
Did you see it? I can't believe it!!
My heart I cannot find!

It was here until I met you
until I looked into your eyes
then without a sound, without pain
and much to my suprise

Now it's gone,but it feels so good
What ever will I do?
I've never been in love like this
until the likes of you.

-SEA-

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1 posted 2000-10-22 03:02 PM


Good work Sea, I liked the last verse especially.

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



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2 posted 2000-10-22 03:55 PM


~Hey Sea,...this reads so well. Could just hear the speaker speaking. I like that. Very neat read. *Peace.
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3 posted 2000-10-22 04:39 PM


Elizabeth~ thank you very much, I'm glad you liked  

SpitFire~ Cool...thanks  

-SEA

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4 posted 2000-10-22 04:44 PM


SEA this is excellant, a very very good poem. I really like this, if fact I love it.
Beautifully put together, well done.
Take care
                   Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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5 posted 2000-10-22 10:44 PM


Don't be afraid ... look deep into my eyes
The security of love and passionate bliss
Lies within these walls of heartfelt cries
As I bestow upon you one big cowboy kiss

Your heart rests safe in the grasps of mine
There is no curse nor is there a magic spell
Just reach down deep and let our love shine
Lift your eyes to mine to see your heart is well

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6 posted 2000-10-22 10:50 PM


Marsha~thank you, glad you liked this  

Mark~ Ok, not just a *SIGH* but now you got a *SWOONIN*   Beautiful, thank you. By the way, when am I gonna get a full length poem from you, to me?  

-SEA

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7 posted 2000-10-22 10:51 PM


SEA~
This is just adorable !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2000-10-22 10:55 PM


My friend I will give you a "FULL Length" anytime. (poem that is  )  Just let a day or two go by and you will see.  So what format would you like it in my friend?  Typical me, 2-line, 4-line, free verse,acrostic, or maybe even a prose.  Shortened prose for open 10.  You name it my friend.  Now shall I catch you while you are swooning?LOL  
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9 posted 2000-10-22 10:58 PM


Sea,
Very nice enjoyed the read.

SEA
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Marge~ thank you for reading  

Mark~ Well, I like it all ways, so you pick, I know I'll just love it   Too late~ I'm on the floor!  

Seymour~ cool, I'm happy you liked this.  

-SEA

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11 posted 2000-10-22 11:07 PM


Scooping you up and kissing all of your bruises....boy you sure got alot of them from one tiny fall.LOL...Yeah, I know you can't see them, but trust me they are there and I need to kiss them before they get worse. ...oooooooohhhhh , look at that one....mmmmmm gotta kiss THAT one.
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12 posted 2000-10-22 11:14 PM


*AHEM*!!!! If you two are done now.... great poem. It read so well and I can totally identify.
Krissie


I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary...
making you lose ur way
I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel
~Touch and Go

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13 posted 2000-10-22 11:16 PM


You missed one.. -SEA ( good night off to dreamland for me)  

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-23-2000).]

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14 posted 2000-10-22 11:21 PM


mmmmmmmm oh yes, that one is a big one...I may have to kiss that on "ALL" night ... you just rest in your dreams my dear and I will take care of the bruise.  Got to admit, this one taste a might sweeter than the others.
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15 posted 2000-10-22 11:27 PM


Enjoyable reading Sea, soft and gliding!

Robert Joseph

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16 posted 2000-10-22 11:35 PM


WOW....amazing write Sea...sometimes all it takes is the touch of the one we are meant to be with to find what was always there....very excellent work~
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17 posted 2000-10-22 11:42 PM


Definitely sounds like you got a little bewitched there, sea. Watch out for that hocus pocus  
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18 posted 2000-10-23 09:50 AM


This is seriously sweet...love it Sea
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19 posted 2000-11-04 01:40 AM


There's magic afoot here for sure; it came from your pen   

Pepper
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20 posted 2000-11-04 01:48 AM



An adorable write Sea
Me giggling can't ya tell

Coco



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21 posted 2000-11-04 01:57 AM


Excellent writing Sea!! wonderful presentation, such depth and intensity...good work!!
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22 posted 2000-11-04 02:46 AM


SEA this is a lovely poem!

Thanks
Jon

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In the winds of Cherokee song
23 posted 2000-11-04 04:11 AM


I am back baby....just not in force yet, but wanted you to know that "we" are not a curse lol.....hugs to you sweet friend and yes I miss you too.
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24 posted 2000-11-04 04:17 AM


'I've been bewitched, I've been bamboozled
someone has been messin with my mind
Did you see it? I can't believe it!!
My heart I cannot find!'

I know EXACTLY what you mean, SEA!  Great poem!!  Love it!!

sp  

Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson

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