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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-11-02 03:10 PM




~Wish Upon Your Star~

No matter who you are
hold on to moonbeam dreams
wish upon your secret star
sprinkle it with stardust hope
love others with open arms
dreams and wishes
can come
true

~BloomingRose~


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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-11-02 04:47 PM


Something we should all remember. Well done.

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



BSC
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2 posted 2000-11-02 04:52 PM


I could hear the sweet voice of the little one in the graphic whispering this piece BR, just beautiful.  Bonnie
Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 2000-11-02 05:25 PM


Deb* This is so beautiful...seems we have
been on the fairy tale and dream wave
length...lol not a bad place to be though is
it  

Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2000-11-02 06:24 PM


Such child like faith to look towards the heavens and believe...

...but, I do know dreams can come true.

Bob <><


peppermint35
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5 posted 2000-11-02 06:58 PM


May the dream go on and on!!!  Lovely

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass

vlraynes
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6 posted 2000-11-02 07:00 PM



Deb-
   this is very beautiful.
   i love it.  

   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-11-02 08:06 PM


heres to wishes, dreams, lucky stars and
to beautiful poetry,--like this one.
enchanting BR.
take care
jm

catalinamoon
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8 posted 2000-11-02 08:11 PM


Nicely done, Rose, and the theme is one I live with.
Very pretty.
Sandra

BloomingRose
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9 posted 2000-11-02 10:02 PM


Elizabeth~ Thank you, glad you like.

Bonnie~ Thats what hopes and dreams are made of. Thank you.

Butterflies~ Not a bad place to be... in our sweet dreams.

Bob~ Yes you do understand. Faith to believe that all things are possible. It's a promise from heaven.  

Peppermint~ Never lose the dream

Vicky~ Thank you, glad you like  

JM~ Thank you and yes, here's to dreams and believing! Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket...

Sandra~ I too never give up on the dreams. Thanks.  

Lone Wolf
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10 posted 2000-11-02 10:06 PM


Deb,

A wonderful reminder to always hold onto your dreams . . . no matter what.  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

BloomingRose
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11 posted 2000-11-03 03:19 PM


Lone Wolf~ Thanks bunches for reading. Hang on to your dreams too!
Nate Dogg
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12 posted 2000-11-03 03:42 PM


Beautiful presentation you have here...thanks for writing this inspirational piece...I know that I'll use your star sprinkles of wisdom!
Take care,


Nathan

Mark Bohannan
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13 posted 2000-11-04 02:11 AM


As long as there are stars in the sky
As long as I can still hear birds sing
As long as there are so many reasons why
I will forever hold to what tomorrow may bring

===============
Wonderful verse of hope and inspiration my friend.  

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 11-04-2000).]

BloomingRose
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14 posted 2000-11-04 07:59 AM


Nate~ Thank you and here's hoping for more star sprinkles for you!

Mark~ Glad to see you on again~ Thanks and yes, wishes for dreams fulfilled should be our hope for tomorrow.

Kethry
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15 posted 2000-11-04 08:07 AM


BloomingRose,
a cosmic piece, combining childhood innocence and magik.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

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