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To Touch Your Heart
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To Touch Your Heart |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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To Touch your heart To touch your heart would be to kiss your eyes To sip from mystic pool that in them lies To dip into the mirrored wells of you And know the self behind the eyes of blue To know your heart would be to sense your mind And savor all the fantasies I’d find Discovering the richness of your thought And purity of splendid words it’s wrought To touch your heart is hearing songs unsung One drop of honey sweet upon my tongue Enough to know the taste of honeycomb The vibrancy of you that’s still unknown I would do anything for just one glance Into the heart that makes my spirit dance Before the force of life draws us apart Allow me in to touch your gentle heart Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
To touch your heart would be to kiss your eyes To sip from mystic pool that in them lies To dip into the mirrored wells of you And know the self behind the eyes of blue. ================ I would do anything for just one glance Into the heart that makes my spirit dance Before to force of life draws us apart Allow me in to touch your gentle heart ============== and poetry allows us all these views... excellent writing Liz, I love the premise and process of this piece. >The vibrancy of you that’s still unknown> what an amazing line that is..so very cool. beautiful tender wishes Liz... touching poetry take care of you for me ... K? *smile* love ya me There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Elizabeth, wow! Found this buried 5 pages down the forum and wanted to put it back up top so all can read it beauty. Loved it. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am so glad that this was returned to the top, where it belongs. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
And a valid "bump up" it was, well woven and sincere. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* Liz, this is just beautiful. . . really beautiful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Liz, This is so deeply moving, truely beautiful. I sigh as well, know you are in my thoughts and prayers. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--A beautiful and tender poem...you do touch my heart with this one. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I would do anything for just one glance Into the heart that makes my spirit dance Before the force of life draws us apart Allow me in to touch your gentle heart." Elizabeth this is not too much to ask...hoping for you that you can touch that gentle heart...James |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Elizabeth-So tender and beautiful. I loved your words. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Elizabeth - how gentle this writing is, and how softly you wrote it. I like it, very much. Bill |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Elizabeth you know how to touch a heart Rich |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
It is always such a pleasure to read your words Elizabeth. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Janet Marie, Such kind thoughts Jwesley. These poems do disappear fast. Thanks for reading and for bringing it back Sunshine, Thanks, dear Lonely Stranger. Thanks for the comments Sven, Nice comment from the romamtic poet. THank you, my friend Cerenity, I appreciate your comments and your thoughts and prayers Martie, Thanks James, It is difficultto touch one's heart, but not impossible Gemini, Thank you Bill, Your comments mean a lot. Thanks Spiked, Glad you were touched. Thank you |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Eagle One, You flew in while I was posting. Thank you for reading and for your kind remark Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Liz This is a very inspirational piece and most touching indeed...superb write my friend  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, You've painted the colors of angel wings A brilliance full of beautious things. Where I for one would surely fly. But all I can is sadly lie. Love Sy |
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