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>>>>All the ways I want You<<<< (B & S)
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>>>>All the ways I want You<<<< (B & S) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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"All the ways I want You" ~ by ~  Bill and Sunny My Darling, walk with me down the path, As I ask, do you feel as I do? and I think of, All the ways I want You... Forever I'll walk down the path and say, Oh yes.....I feel as you do...... With my hand in yours, my only real thought is, All the ways I want You... Your smile has captured my heart, honestly, I never had a clue... That the night we met you would capture me, and I think of, All the ways I want You... That first night we met, I tried so very hard to smile in a way that was true... To show you my smile,was to show you my thoughts of... All the ways I want You... The softness of your touch excites me... your warm body, also does too... I kiss your lips so lovingly, and I think of, All the ways I want You... I touch you with love and I see in your eyes, it excites you with fire through and through... When your lips meet mine, in a soft gentle kiss.... I felt, All the ways I want You... Our embrace is so magical, Dawn peeks its head, up through... I gently touch you all over, and I think of, All the ways I want You... With magic you held me...night disappeared... With dawn love came calling anew... Your touch awakened my body, and thoughts of... All the ways I want You Your breasts heave with excitement, when my lips touch them, and you coo... You whisper in my ear that you love me, and I think of, All the ways I want You... When you touch your lips to my breasts, it excites me.. Soft sounds I make as lovers do... Your whispers of lover are returned, as I think of... All the ways I want you... You kiss me and your lips quiver, you're not sure, but your heart is true... Now you're whispering to me, and I think of... All the ways I want you... I kiss you in anticipation and trembling, But knowing your heart will be true... I whisper my thoughts to your ear, and you hear of, All the ways I want you... My darling, I'm in love with your spirit, precious you, that came out of the blue... I will never crave for another, and I think of... All the ways I want you... I know that you love what you know of my spirit, Do you know that I love yours, too? My heart is a slave to the love that I crave and to... All the ways I want you... ~~ We would like to thank you for stopping by ~~  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-26-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunny and Bill this is so great, you work so well together. This is so beautiful and tender I love it, I really do. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
It's a beautiful passionate duet you sing I love the harmony Liz |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Perfetly lyrical. I read it over and over. I can hear a melody to this. Beautiful, indeed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, I have to say that this is one of the beauties that will live on. You are so extraordinary with your touch. Thank you Sunny, thank you very much. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marsha... Thank you, my friend for stopping and having a read!! And also for your nice reply!! Liz... Duets are only worthy if there's an audience to share in the music!! Thank you so much.....it's good to see you here! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
seraphin.... You have the soul of a musician, as there is a melody that floats through this! We appreciate you coming by to listen to our duet! Bill.... You are my friend, and my partner, but you are much too humble!! If it wasn't for your tender initial words, this would not be here. You inspire me to answer from the heart, and my hand follows with the colors. Together, we paint the canvas of the soul.........It is you I thank!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny and Bill, what a combo you two are, so dynamic and romantic. Love this writing. Happiness to you both. Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh WOW. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sunny1 - You look very nice with those sunglasses. Bill, yanno, I think red is your color! lol - Great cowriting here, you two. I enjoyed it very much, and the work you put into it is evident. The point and counterpoint is great. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sandra.... Oh, I am glad you came by to see this one. I thought you might like it, and we thank you for your reply, too!! Hi Sunshine.... I'm hoping that "OH, Wow" was a good one!!! Ha!!! Bill and I thank you!! Hi LJA.... You've got the best sense of humor on the Web!!! Just love it!!! And I bet Bill does look good in red, and BTW--I look darn good in sunglasses!! Ha!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a perfect pair you two make in heart and verse alike. Very tender and Passionate writing coming from the two of you. Don't ever stop co-writting as long as you can make them like this. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Mark... It's so good to see you today!! Bill and I always appreciate your replies, and look forward to them. Yes, I enjoy writing with Bill...he's a romantic genius, and I, too, hope to write many more with him. Thank you for all you've said... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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