Open Poetry #10 |
Games We Used To Play (Oh please read. I'm begging even. Yuh) |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
When winter turns real crispy And almonday’s are football now You play my game with ole Plain Jane Though O. P. Nutters calls it chow Of course when it’s getting colder We think it’s a nasty bummer Infields are empty outfields too Nary the boys of summer I made this game to chase the blues So you thought you're the one that did Easy to think of MnM baseball As your idea but it wasn’t you kid To hit a single, draw dark brown Two baggers once were light brown M’s Here came a vote and introduced Each blue now the same as them My red M's came back to glory O’ they did once cause bad cancer So to clear the bases 'cept for it That’s the MnM coaches answer Can’t pitch to the mean green M’s Homers are they in every draw Only flying M’s o’er the fence Can’t say that I ever saw Obviously orange and yellow Lack MnM baseball appeal Always an out they are to me They keep the score a bit more real Everyone knows the way to win You gotta not hit the batter Under these rules score many points How does chocolate even matter! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-03-2000).] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
You Score with a sweet tooth, Yuh! Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Now would this be minor league or major league?< !signature--> Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". [This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Now where did my kids put their Halloween candy?! I want some m-n-m's! This is great Walt! -SEA |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Yuh Yuh....Walt, you is out of the rest of the season..Yuh, fer I done and won by eating the most chocolate yuh.....but..um..now my teeth itch....um...did you..naw..you didn't...did ya...didn't like spike those M&M's with....alum......right? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx kids i ate about oops i mean poets i ate about ten whole candy bars today or the equivalent there of!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WALT~ < !signature-->GRAND SLAM ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Well plainly put you are the P nuttiest guy I know...hehehe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey walty! beg me to read? c'mon...you put on a smile on my face big time. a kool aid smile even. yer so cute. Hugs and love from the prez... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
big missing tooth smile here |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Walt, you are the kiss in my Hershey's. Chocolate rules yuh! Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
chocolate is the absolut in my life |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Chocolate milk, pudding, cake, frosting, candy bars, ice cream, lip gloss, Heck I think it would make for fine bubble bath!! Yummy little ditty yuh yuh!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Walt, Mmmmm, Mushy Marsha, munches most M'n'M's Mmmmmmmm Love this very tasty Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Now Walt calm down, remember chocolate is an aphrodisiac. You better go home for lunch. I hope the Mrs. can keep up with you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Walty, very good, great imagination my friend, well done enjoyed the read, but were they Peanut M&M's loved it Walty Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thanks Walt now I need a chocolate fix Mmmmm where did I stash that chocie This is a fun piece ...thanks Walt you always pull through with the fun one's Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Love the poem; love chocolate; love the rush; hate the coma that follows though laughs Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey Walt~ Look what happens when you beg, we come back for a second look Love it Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL! Wonderful acrostic Walt! Clever presentation, and a delicious read ... very much enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
PECAN in on you, WOW... this was wonderful... wish I had the time to really respond correctly...but this was the first words that came to mind...~~Smiling ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks guys yuh miss seein yuh kit are you an icqer are not and pecan in on you that was hilarious thanx for the smile naked thoughts yuh yuh |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
eminems for dinner, TBueno for dessert! you won't be comin off that cloud for a while. crooze |
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kelly bo bottoms Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 17 |
WOW-that was soooo cool! Keep up the creativity! |
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