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Assemble at Nature's Mirror
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Assemble at Nature's Mirror |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Assemble at Nature’s Mirror in the dawn, beneath morning light or toward noon, all seasons call perhaps will be under pale moon’s cast or a cloudy day that casts a pall see then one true reflective image first mirror made by hand of God initial fine measure of depth and spirit brilliant most in all of Nature’s pod in most serene, still and quiet times brook filled lake clearly enhances shimmering visibly all of life and reflecting back all the chances I would lay beside cool waters envision walking spirits by my side and in the shimmer see their story of history known, and wisdom wide should the mirror then take ripple and spread reflections to other shores know it then takes good life with it and the spirits shall live, evermore for God’s mirror creates a window to see in His eyes heavenly creation to lay with you beside calm waters would be a gift of still sensation Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
This is a beautiful spiritually visioned poem. I love the images you create. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Karilea ~ Ya just gotta know how much I love this poem!!!! Simply beautiufl. Bonnie |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ron, thank you kindly... Bonnie, I knew you'd come visit with me...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
to see these images would indeed be a blessing. . . wonderful Sunshine. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I think you best yourself with every write, my friend. This was simply grand. jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ 'should the mirror then take ripple and spread reflections to other shores know it then takes good life with it and the spirits shall live, evermore' Such a lovely write. The looking-glass holds the ripples of reflections from the past~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
inspirital beauty, penned with a lot of love, thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. excellent write. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a great title to set up these soft and beautiful stanzas...great work sunshine...I love "still sensation," line.... really well thought out...take care.......ethome |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is so great. Such a perfect description, utterly superb. Another masterpiece, finely crafted, expertly executed, and served up perfectly. You know I love this one, I do I really do!! Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, images blessings, indeed...thank you... jwesley, I will take that as positive, thank you... Marge, I had hoped you would like...thank you... Charisma, sometimes inspiration comes hard, and I am glad this smiled on you... Ethome, I like great titles, glad you do too... Marsha, I don't dare write one that wouldn't bring you in...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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