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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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I broke a leg on the stage The bit bullet broke my teeth Winged it and compressed my spine The flying leap messed my feet Stood up to be counted, was ignored Saw shrubs instead of forests and trees Rolled my eyes right out the door Stumbled after and broke my knees I bit the big one, it bit back Eyes on the back of my head won't look While healing took up literature And was devoured by a... Alicat (there, i finished for all those who asked where the ending was  )[This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
the last line was just the whole poem was just p s (great) |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
This was really Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
is this to be continued?  "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Did you have mexican last night? haa...are you back yet?  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This could be one of the great lines of all times.... I bit the big one, it bit back Damn! I wish I'd said that!!!! devoured by a book? |
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