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Paradelle With Alliteration Attitude - Tylenol On The Side
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Paradelle With Alliteration Attitude - Tylenol On The Side |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Paradelle With Alliteration Tylenol On The Side ~*Marge Tindal*~ Plausibly pondering positive provocative pleasures Plausibly pondering positive provocative pleasures Mocking magnificent multitudinous memories Mocking magnificent multitudinous memories Mocking provocative plausibly multitudinous pleasures Pondering magnificent positive memories Twisting turning tumultuous times Twisting turning tumultuous times Forever favorably fashioned fables Forever favorably fashioned fables Twisting fashioned fables forever Turning times favorably tumultuous Surrendered sorrow sadly sinks Surrendered sorrow sadly sinks Often outlandishly emitted Often outlandishly emitted Sorrow outlandishly emitted Often sadly sinks surrendered Mocking sorrow often plausibly emitted Pondering favorably fashioned positive memories Twisting provocative multitudinous pleasures Outlandishly tumultuous fables forever turning Surrendered sinks magnificent times sadly ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
THAT'S IT!!!! sigh..yer tryin' ta drive me nuts, aren't ya? GOOD GRIEF!!! all i can think, is... "it was a dark and stormy night..." SIGH. Your talent amazes me, time after time. I'm so glad---I've grown, I hope, just reading. Thank you so much, me mum!!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Oh Marge.....*sigh*.....this was beautiful....you are the queen of the parradelles....love to read it, and always smile than.....and maybe....well if I have enough confidence I will try it once....*though*....(mmmm...I still don't know what tylenol is.....must find the answer first). |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
 You have talent in abundance girl, this is so pleasing to read. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is WONDERFUL, I've no idea how you even start one of these Paradoodoo Paradelwhatsits, whatever, I'm not going there, I am not going to this word hell. But this Marge is amazing, clapping loudly, at your consummate skill. Bravo, bravo, bravo. Tale care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Applause, applause, applause!!!  I had to read this twice out loud, smiling all the way through! A tongue twister extraordinaire, and you've penned this magnificently Marge! Your talent shines brilliantly in this complex piece, loved it! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ LOL ! You love-child you ! Charisma~ Bless your heart. Honey, Tylenol is a medication to soothe headaches - BIG headaches ! Tracie~ It was undoubtedly the lure of the Witches of Paradelle ! I hope it's passed. Thank you so much. Marsha~ And I think you are very wise ! Kit~ Goes down well with a morning cup of coffee, huh ? LOL ! Thanks, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
WOW ~ Wonderful Marge, now, once I get my tongue untwisted, I've got to go take a couple of those tylenol.... Bonnie[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, I'd bow to your brilliance but I have to remove my tongue from my tonsils first. There thath's bether. Absolutely amazing! Be well Buy tylenol shares. Kethry. Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thanks for letting me know that tylenol is a medicine.......for headache......*lol* |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Alliteration AND paradelle! You are unbelievable! and I bet you even LIKE writing these things! I am truly in awe... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- WOW!!!!! This is incredible!!! Leave it to you to come up with something even more complex than the paradelle itself...and then make it look easy...lol. I am truely amazed, my friend. big hugs, -vicky p.s. of course...considering my love of a good challenge, i may actually have to torture myself and try one of these...lol. now see what you've gone and done...lol. < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ I hope reading them doesn't have the same effect as writing them. Kethry~ No bows necessary. But share the Tylenol. Charisma~ Sweetie, don't write Paradelle's ... and you won't need Tylenol. You're welcome. Debbie~ Oh, no ! No likee ! Just a compulsion ! Thanks, gal. Vicky~ Oh, please do. LOL ! Then you can have what I'm having for lunch - Tylenol soup !  Actually it was easier than the regular ones. That is ... if there is such a thing as regular. *Thanks for your generous comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge this is a wonderful example of repetition for emphasis and it is very skillfully done.....there's some lively lines with lots of messages ...so much fun and so good to read your work again..it's just a pure joy!! take care........ethome |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sheesh  . . . you just had to go and make the rest of us look bad didn't you???*I know serenity. . . she's just showing off now!!!* Seriously Marge, this is incredible. . . I'm just amazed. . . really well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ How wonderful to see you ! I so appreciate your comments. Sven~ LOL @ showing off ! I'm glad you enjoyed it ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Kudos, Marge! Glad I skipped over to Open tonight. I've only read a few of these things, but this one is the first that actually sort of made sense! I'm totally impressed! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you've hurt wayoutwalt's brain!!!! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
the more of these i read, the more determined i am not to write one-- at first i was tempted....lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*bowing to the queen* well if this dont get an A from Teacher Nan nothing will my goodness....you really went for it and made it look easy... excellent work Margie-girl later-teachers-pet-gator  jm PS..forget Tylenol....Raspberry tea will fix what ails ya hehehe |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Marge mocks multitudinous memories magnificently... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tylenol tablets testing tenacity... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KCS~ WOW ! It made sense ? ALRIGHT ! Walt~ LOL ! It pained mine as well. Prometheus~ Tempted, eh ? The teacher will see this and you'll be hauled off to class to finish your assignment ! JanetMarie~ Oh, I went for it alright ! (more Tylenol, that is !) Nan~ Student *smiles* ! Thanks, Teach ! Karilea~ You got that right ! *Thanks to all. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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