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Write Your Name Across My Sky
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Write Your Name Across My Sky |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Beloved this poem I give, like my love, < !signature-->freely to you Write Your Name Across My Sky I could write your name across my sky Or inscribe your initials one mile high I'd fight my way through hell's own fire Or seek your soul as it soars ever higher Anywhere I'd go or anything I would do If it meant I could always be with you * * * I've your name, it's etched into my heart Using lovers voice you show me my part In this game we play, just you and I One glance and I can't help but sigh Loves' own truth is clear and bright It shines from you to bring me the light. Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 I hereby crown you Majestic Marsha... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
You are certainly soaring like a bird.Beautiful write. Fly on. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love mush, it's like love poems, blended well and delicious! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Perfect love poem, happiness oozes out of every word.. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ I really like this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, thank you, love, but why? I don't hold the crown, I just hold the heart.  Truly I thank you  Ron K, I'm flying as high as the stars, where I'm waltzing with my love. Yes SEA full of mush today! Kathleen, so do I, Love is all around, isn't life grand.  Sandra, thank you, truly I do. The love couldn't help but ooze, because I have it in plenty. The more I give away, the more comes from me. Take care a smile to tell you I'm thinking of you.Marge, I'm really happy that you like this. I thank you, I truly do. Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
lovely piece from your hand.... excellent write ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Everyone needs a little mush in their day...thanks for mine |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marsha, call it whatever you want but I label this a sweet write and an enjoyable read so don't hold back when ya write this kinda stuff cus it's sooooo nice to read every now and then... 'mushy stuff' from a poet's pen Coco |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Charisma, thank you, it's mushy and I'm glad, sometimes it just sort of appears. Yes besides what better way to tell someone you love them. Paula, thanks love, a little mush, bit like a Mills and Boon, hardly the ideal diet, but sometimes it's nice. Take care CocoBaci, very glad you liked it. It's all warm and fluffy, which I can be sometimes, and then others I'm not. Thanks for reading Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There is one fortunate fellow out there. This is a beautiful mushiness poem |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
'Deer Thank you, but I'm the fortunate one, and I know it. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
fly bubbly one...dance on the stars with your love... this is so sweet... hugs,dg "i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this was especially sweet and leaves one with a wonderful feeling. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now all this mushy stuff from you is apt to leave some permanent engravings of their own are they not? Oh, I see, that is the intention is it? LOL....So beautiful, and yes it is what some call mushy but for some reason, mushy wears well on you. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey nothing wrong with mushy!! We'd all be wearing black pants and white shirts (or something similiar) if we were all the same. I feel the overwhelming devotion and loyalty in this work and it's great!! ethome |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is so lovely and so sweet, maybe it is mushy, but it makes one feel like singing a happy song Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee, I am love, I'm flying so high I don't ever want to come down. Glad you like it Be good Bubbles Wynter, thank you, truly, it certainly leaves me with a wonderful feeling.  Mark my friend, why thank you, and yes I think it might well be the idea. Isn't life wonderful. Ethome, glad you like this one, I seem to alternate between hot and mush, but hey I'm happy. Pepper, Many thanks truly Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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