Open Poetry #10 |
Halloween For My Sisters |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ahh.. Lonely wind howls, October fun reminiscent, Of decadent chocolate days. Romping, chanting, running, Bagged, In big orange plastic, While driving slowly, Making our way down, To the houses, Baring bright porch lights, Like beacons for sweet little devils, And flowering littl angels. Little sisters in awe, Amazed by the new site, And the new fun, About and out, On this exciting Autumn evening. When first I graduated, From trick or treat status, To adult sister chaperone, Sharing in the fun, I was sad almost. But once I began to see, Those painted eyes light up, From an undisturbed perspective, I had a whole new kind of delight. So as I miss you all tonight, My dear little sisters, I hope you are having, As much fun as we all once did. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
What a lovely perspective you looked upon this...and still conveyed the anticipation of those goodies! Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is so sweet!!! It sure brings back memories for me too!!! Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sweet poem! Brings back a lot of memories for me as well... Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Temptress~ Awwwwwwwwww ! This is soooooooo sweet ! Makes me miss those days with my kids ! Thank you for sharing this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thanks so far everyone !I'm glad you are all enjoying my work! I wish I had the time to make individual replies, but I have a 4am morning ahead of me! Laters and Love, Friends! Happy Halloween! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I don't think that I ever stopped taking my sister and brother out when I got older. . . Great poem Temptress. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ahhhh...me longing for those days. Wonderful piece, brings back memories upon memories jwesley |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Bullseye on the tender memories, temptress. Thanks for letting me live them again..... |
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