Forever Smiles (inspired by dsnyder)

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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2000-10-31 02:57 PM

Forever Smiles (inspired by dsnyder)

Night shadows dance upon the wall,
Memories taking hold.
Twirling, drawing close to you.
In eyes that smile their gold.
Forever drowning in their deep,
Feelings then implode.
Inside a heart "forever smiles"
And beats a silent code.

F or every moment spent with you,
One's thoughts roam free between.
Radiating Wynter's warmth,
Enwrapped, in loving scene.
Velvet murmurs, intoxicate,
Enamoured, desires rise,
Restore the sad with "forever smiles"
          From gazing in your eyes.

Softened looks, that whisper love,
Magnetic, they do draw.
Intensity, each kiss of lips, so
Lyrical in call.
Every breath, inhaled from you are
Sighs that dew me in.
        "Forever smiles" you've gifted me,
         Release from deep within.

~Wynter Bliss

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"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-31-2000).]

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2000-10-31 03:43 PM

Wynter~ My dear, I do so like Acrostic poems and this is wonderful.....inspired by Denise....yep....

"Velvet murmurs, intoxicate," loved this line!

-SEA

Ron K. Fox
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2 posted 2000-10-31 03:51 PM

This is so wonderfully clever.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Denise

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3 posted 2000-10-31 08:51 PM

This is breathtakingly beautiful, Wynter Bliss! That I was able to inspire something this spectacular is such an honor!

Denise

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2000-10-31 10:02 PM

Sea- I often am inspired by a word or two either from other's poetry or from even responses and I loved the idea of smiles taking the place of a frown. Thank you for enjoying (and I do enjoy acrostis, too.

Ron- clever I am not so sure, but I do enjoy your responses

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2000-10-31 10:03 PM

Denise- the honour is all mine...your poem caught the heart of me and I couldn't even leave until I completed my thoughts.

Thank you for the inspiration

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

Marge Tindal

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6 posted 2000-10-31 10:11 PM

Wynter~
This is just so lovely.
Denise is an inspiration, both in her poetry and her replies.

And dagnabit ... she's just always there !
Blessing us with her presence.

I can certainly see how her writes would inspire you ...
she's an inspiration to us all.

This is just a well-done work of poetic art.
The acrostic is a bonus !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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snowpants
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7 posted 2000-10-31 10:26 PM

Wynter, you are just too sweet! Another great one!! Beautifully written!

sp

Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Elizabeth Cor
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since 2000-10-13

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Over the river and through the woods

8 posted 2000-10-31 10:41 PM

Gorgeous! Imagery, flow, and strong unfolding...

~
Intensity, each kiss of lips, so
Lyrical in call
~

... oh, you are going to be such a contribution to this place! Fabulous! Fabulous!

~ Beth

tracie66
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9 posted 2000-11-01 06:01 AM

Wynter~
A delightfully inspired piece...well done
most enjoyable
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

10 posted 2000-11-01 07:58 AM

Marge- I find many of the poets on here to be quite inspiring. I am sure I will be posting many such poems, as I keep on reading and absorbing these beauties expressed daily.

Thank you for your uplifting words.

snowpants- I am glad you enjoyed, but the thanks  go to the  poets on passions for inspiring me so.

Beth~- your words touched me, that was  so kind of you to say. huggz

Tracie- I am  so glad you stopped to read

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

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