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Jamie
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0 posted 2000-10-27 11:57 PM


Red Halloween Moon
In Nearly November Sky
Like A Lollipop





Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



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Toddles
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1 posted 2000-10-28 12:05 PM


Mossy old graveyard
Fog forms a misty doorway
Passages beyond


"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind!"...Dr. Seuss

Denise
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2 posted 2000-10-28 12:05 PM


Cute! Very Halloweeny!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-10-28 12:08 PM


Oh Jamie, I've missed your Haiku's....

red moon like a lollipop, I like it!

loved it Jamie

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Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-10-28 12:21 PM


Halloween Haiku!!! Only YOU could do it so well!    
Paula Finn
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5 posted 2000-10-28 02:46 AM


Jamie...this is too cool...I just wish I could say as much with as few words as you do
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6 posted 2000-10-28 02:53 AM


Hey Prom, cute halloween haiku
Tracie~


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dgvarner
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7 posted 2000-10-28 03:23 AM


heehee..i like    a lollipop...LOL

hugs, dg

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8 posted 2000-10-28 09:25 AM


Prometheus~
What a lovely image your Haiku brings to mind.
~*Marge*~


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9 posted 2000-10-28 09:54 AM


Spooky, dark night sky
Mr. Moon hid behind clouds
As witches passed by.

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10 posted 2000-10-28 11:00 AM


Cool stuff, Jamie..

Lame attempt at haiku follows...

shadows manifest
scary inner selves revealed
look out for tonight...


Have a happily creepy halloween..
Sandra

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11 posted 2000-10-28 03:18 PM


Nice piece Prom!

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12 posted 2000-10-28 03:20 PM



Jamie-
   i'm loving this!!  
   great haiku.  

   -vicky




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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Jamie
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13 posted 2000-10-28 04:57 PM


I fell off the wagon for this...lol--- I had promised myself I would not write any Haiku for a while--- well it had been awhile..

thanks to all for reading and replying



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Kit McCallum
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14 posted 2000-10-28 05:02 PM


Wonderful Haiku Jamie ... picture perfect vision captured, well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Nan
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15 posted 2000-10-31 07:28 AM


Halloweeny Bump !!




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16 posted 2000-10-31 10:57 PM


Me likes!!!  

HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!
  

Bridgette


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Kethry
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17 posted 2000-11-01 07:22 AM


halloweeny night
ghouls and goblins frightening
children in the streets

pumpkin scones to eat
children are candy treating
nightmare for dentists

You're right Jamie they are addictive, but i like yours better. Great write
Kethry


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18 posted 2000-11-01 07:31 AM


I like this one..*loL*

Charisma

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19 posted 2000-11-01 07:49 AM


Red Halloween Moon
In Nearly November Sky
Like A Lollipop



Indigo Surrounds
Swallows The Sweet Red
Savoring It's Taste

I just love haiku's

~Wynter Bliss




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