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Scattered Thoughts and Thoughtered Scats
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Scattered Thoughts and Thoughtered Scats |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Scattered Thoughts Talking to myself again A habit people hate But seems without self dialogue It’s hard to postulate So I am usually quite entwined In deepest self debate But then I’m so amazed at the Conclusions I create The edge I gain with this device I cannot overstate Though others find me kind of wierd I think it’s really great The mind’s debate of solid theories It may formulate Takes a lot of time, my friends That’s why I’m always late Some Thoughtered Scats Postulating time Cut in half with short Haiku Now always on time Conclusions come fast No time for self dialogue Nor to even think No postulating Leaves more time for fantasy And pretty phrases Haiku is too short Except to be beautiful There is no purpose Elizabeth Santos |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Liz, excellent thoughts, excellent twists. Did you know that ppl with convoluted minds are more intelligent. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Who could resist a title like that? *G* Not I!!!! At least when you're talking to yourself, you're having an intelligent conversation... this is great! *S* |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Loved Suthern's line above LOL  "Who said that?" .. "I did!" .. "Stop typing!" .. "No!" .. "Just tell Liz you enjoyed the read!" .. "OK, just shhhhh, and let me type!" I thoroughly enjoyed this Liz! From one self-talker to the next ... if ya get tired of talking to yourself, I'm always here, LOL! Wonderful thoughts and excellent Haikus/Senryus!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kethry My mind might be a little twisted And quite convoluted I hope this doesn't mean that I Will soon be instituted Thanks, dear, my head is spinning at the "intelligent" Suthern, Another "intelligent" Wow! THanks. I never thought of myself that way. Thanks, sweet lady Liz |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kit, That could get a bit confusing with four talking at the same time. I'll talk to you later as soon as I'm finished with my self-dialogue Thanks, my twin Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Oh, my ... You rock me with your rhyme ! And darned if I don't feel inspiration coming on ! ! Love ya', gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Margie, my dear It doesn't take a crazy grandma to get you inspired All you do is get up in the morning I think you even dream in poetry Thanks for indulging in this convoluted friend Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
-ing ... big time !~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Liz, First I have to say I love the title And I loooved the haiku/senryus! You are just SO good!~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Liz - this one - EXTRA SPECIAL |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Rosepetals, Thank you for your comments, much appreciated Bill, I guess you know now that I'm really crazy. Thanks for the extra special Liz |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Liz- well, somehow this one got past me on the first time around, but i'm loving it now. i think it needs another trip to the top. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, clever, wise and as Wilfred said extra special. Love Sy |
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